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What Makes You Feel Poetry 2

I feel sad my friend drifted away --- a limerick gave me a laugh.

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Karen Jones

Date: 4/13/2025 5:47:00 PM

Oh my dear so glad you can smile despite sadness! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2025 10:37:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True... Tears of joy Not sadness for me. Hooray!!! Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away...........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/9/2025 1:39:00 PM

Glad you found a laugh amidst your sadness, Paula! Blessings, dear one!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2025 11:04:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True... Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away...........

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/5/2025 7:45:00 AM

Great one Paula. I am happy the Limerick gave you a laugh. Laughter is healing :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2025 1:28:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" to be a, Great one. Laughter can be good when we are sick or sad. Poetry does have power both good and bad or happy and sad in the words the writer writes. Hugs... Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Maria Williams

Date: 4/5/2025 3:30:00 AM

Dear Paula,there’s something so real in this—how laughter can gently soften the sting of sadness. Bittersweet and honest, with a lovely touch of hope. Good luck in the contest...Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2025 1:25:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" to be, Bittersweet and honest. Laughter can be good when we are sick or sad. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Crystol Woods

Date: 4/4/2025 4:33:00 PM

Oh nice! Limericks are good for that! Your Monoku seems to say that where there is pain and sadness, there is also pleasure and joy! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2025 1:22:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True... A monoku to make one think. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away...........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/4/2025 8:36:00 AM

Oh, my, you sent me to the east and then suddenly to the west, and I'm having trouble arriving anywhere - I think my reactions are south and north divided! I'm being seriously silly because your monoku is thought provoking which, I believe, is always a good thing. Andrea's right, we poets took this contest prompt in different directions and your is an individualistic insight, very good ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2025 10:07:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True... Yes, each writer looks at things in a very different way, then writes on it. I think it is fun to make the reader think from time to time. A monoku to make one think. Hooray!!! Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2025 11:27:00 AM

I think people are interpreting the contest in different ways, but I really like this approach as well.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2025 10:04:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True... Yes, each writer looks at things in a very different way, then writes on it. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Michael Tor

Date: 4/3/2025 11:00:00 AM

Glad the Limerick can bring Joy to you my Dear friend. God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2025 10:00:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. This was just a write. Not True.... Blessings... Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

John Read

Date: 4/3/2025 7:26:00 AM

Hi Paula nothing beats a good old limerick, wish you well in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. It was fun to bring to life. You are so right, nothing beats a good old limerick. Words are very powerful. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/3/2025 3:02:00 AM

Paula, Limericks can give one a laugh, even when a heart’s in the dark, they’re good for the soul when days are cold… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 10:05:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. Yes, Limericks are fun and have power to make the reader happy and laugh. Hooray!!! Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Deb M

Date: 4/3/2025 2:11:00 AM

Both sides of lifes coin in your words Paula….and the power of poetry! Wonderful poem….Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 10:03:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" to be a, Wonderful poem. Yes, poetry does have power both good and bad or happy and sad in the words the writer writes. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2025 1:57:00 AM

- The eyes can smile, the mouth can laugh, but the sorrow in the heart will always remain ... lovely words, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:58:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write to have, lovely words. It was fun to bring to life. Hugs... Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Ink Empress

Date: 4/3/2025 12:38:00 AM

Awwn poetry is cathartic and healing when we are going through loss and grieving, sometimes yes; poetry can make a difference! Thats so nice a limerick made you smile! Pleasure reading your poem. Best wishes in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:56:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. It was fun to bring to life. Words are very powerful. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/2/2025 10:37:00 PM

true; we manage to thrive midst pain...nice going, paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:54:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. It was fun to bring to life. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/2/2025 8:43:00 PM

Poetry has magic powers, to turn a frown upside down! I enjoyed this lovely monoku, Paula. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:53:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write to be a, lovely monoku. Yes, poetry does have magic and power in the words for the reader. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Reya Suri

Date: 4/2/2025 5:26:00 PM

I love this!!! So much meaning in so little words <3

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:49:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you love my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. It was fun to bring to life. Words are powerful... Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Terry Flood

Date: 4/2/2025 3:57:00 PM

How guilty we can feel when we laugh, though in mourning. You have basically illustrated a very human condition, Paula. I used to love M.A.S.H. and you have just described precisely why that program worked. Terry

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2025 9:48:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "What Makes You Feel Poetry 2" write. It was fun to bring to life. I also love the old M.A.S.H. shows. Poetry like a limerick can put a smile on a very sad heart so have a fun day writing away..................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/2/2025 2:30:00 PM

What Makes You Feel Poetry 2~Date Written:4/2/2025~Written By Human Poet....

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/4/2025 8:39:00 AM

Love this, "written by human poet ...." Maybe we should make that an acronym WBHP, and all use it. Just great, Paula, so right on for this day and age. CayCay

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