Get Your Premium Membership

What Losing True Love Is About

As the sun sets, and the moon slowly fades away I awaken to emptiness, and the start to a new day Glancing over, to where you once slept Emotions take over, tears fall, and i fill with regret Words continue to bounce around inside of my head because of the words, that were left unsaid easy to think about, but, the words won't come out Slowly I am learning, what losing true love is about Memories are what I have left, some good and some bad The good ones bring a smile to my face, the bad make me sad Friends ask why I continue, to suffer the pain and heartache But, who am I to argue with such things as fate Sometimes in love, there is heartache and pain The majority of the problems, truly I am to blame Would it help, if I climbed a mountain to shout That it might be to late, but, I found out what losing true love is about

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/6/2016 2:06:00 AM
DONALD, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2016 11:53:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Donald..linda
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2010 3:54:00 AM
So well written and emotional!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2010 7:33:00 AM
wow! very impressive for a man and his emotions,,, enjoyed your poem,.and welcome to the soup,.miss..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/29/2010 3:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Donald. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/26/2010 8:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and fantastic.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 9:16:00 PM
i can definitely feel the emotion in this piece, but it feels like you let the rhymes dominate the piece, and it detracted from it overall. As a rhymer myself i know it can be difficult to carry a message with th usual rhyming combos, but when you pull it off right. Rhyming poetry is unmatched.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 7:38:00 PM
this is very good...i try to convey a prespective on love...enjoyed this with love always....Lizzy.b <3
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 7:32:00 PM
Lovely profession of love lost... Thanks for sharing. Lay
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs