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What Lies Beneath

Mouth full of lies Face frozen, unreadable Eyes black, hot coals Outside sweet, inside pure evil “I love you,” you whisper Hands all over Until morning you own me Bound to a tawdry bed Out of all your lies, “I love you” was my favorite You were so coy Slick like a fox Folding me into your box Twisting and turning Finding my breaking point Pushing me over the edge Fists fly, fighting back Sick of your head games You’re just a well-dressed fool You only think of yourself Rubbing salt into my wounds Calling me back, hands so gentle Stop trying to get me back into your web I’m already gone, this fly got away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Brittney. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Brittney. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:21:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem - thank you
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:58:00 PM
Congrats Brittany on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:05:00 PM
I can relate to this....folding me into your box, twisting and turning....i went through this for many years....thanks for sharing this poem...
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:31:00 PM
Creative and interesting write with good images and nicely worded, I see a growing poet in you, Brittany
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:18:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out our contests too..
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:50:00 PM
Out of all your lies, “I love you” was my favorite. I love this part but not only, great job; a pleasure to read.
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