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What It Isn'T

WHAT IT ISN’T It isn’t waiting for the downtown trolley Hearing the ding of its bell Isn’t knowledge of threat Walking around Municipal Square In rain, snow or fair Chin up Eyes staring off Biting the bic What is it that isn’t? When that trolley dings What sound rushes from mind to ears? What really is it one hears? It isn’t the doomsday bell Isn’t the whoosh of Detroit steel From all points urging acts Of large corporate zeal It isn’t what shouldn’t It isn’t sadness or happiness Doesn’t herald up golden times Isn’t a struck life force, eternity’s chimes What then is it? Whatever It isn’t waiting for the downtown trolley Old Dave Austin

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/12/2016 8:01:00 PM

This feels like one of Alice's brain twizzles and teasers. "The White Queen: Can you do addition? What's one and one and one and one and one and one and one and one and one and one? Alice: I don't know. I lost count." I know of many things that aren't, in fact I know more aren't than is. BTW, what time will that trolley arrive? Keep well, Love, Mikki

Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:22:00 PM

A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2016 4:03:00 PM

Connie chose the perfect word. Intriguing!! You are THAT and more, Daver.

Daver Austin
Date: 4/14/2016 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. As I go down Life Soup's trail I become more and more intrigued by your handling of the many forms. Love, Old daver

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/12/2016 3:33:00 AM

A superb intriguing journey this took me on Daver. I love the way you express what is and isn't! #7 ; )

Daver Austin
Date: 4/12/2016 9:54:00 AM

Hi, Connie. This is kind of a reverse nostalgia. Thanks for the great comment. Love, Dave

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/10/2016 6:58:00 PM

I read this one several times. Then I read it out loud. It sang to me and I understood even if it said nothing this is a wonderful piece but it does have something to say. I love, love it. A Fav!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/10/2016 11:50:00 AM

Beautiful and interesting piece..........A.M.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 3:27:00 AM

Daver, what is it? What is it? ;) I'm still in suspense. What can I say, it is that isn't waiting for the downtown trolley... what ever destined it may be I like the sound. Forever is a significant impact..... Enjoyed. Linda

Daver Austin
Date: 4/10/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thanks for the read, dear chum. What is it everybody is looking for. Something tells me we're all the same in what it is. I think you inspire me, DA. Your stuff is always searching, always has something to say, always has to be thought about. Love, Old daver

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2016 2:04:00 PM

Dave, well done, great write, 7 ~

Daver Austin
Date: 4/10/2016 11:04:00 AM

Thanks, pretty lady. Let's see what you are all about today. Love, Old daver

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/8/2016 1:23:00 PM

Hi Daver, It is truly outstanding. A perfect 7 from me. Flow is very smooth from top to bottom. I enjoyed........hugs

Daver Austin
Date: 4/9/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Manmath. Now let's see what you've written. Love, daver