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A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of
short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short
lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and
rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim.
Here are the rules:
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”)
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the
first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”)
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2
as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be
“house for rent”)
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4
as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first
word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)
There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipse after the final two words
in lines 49 & 50.

 
Blitz does not rhyme, but I wanted to challenge myself with one that rhymes. 
What is a thought? What is not? Not making a confession Not impressed by expression Expression that hides Expression that guides Guides my poetic heart Guides my collective art Art can attract Art is abstract Abstract like mankind Abstract is the mind Mind is no Gestapo Mind is like Picasso Picasso's pencil was gold Picasso's palette was bold Bold like Dali's drawn daydreams Bold conceptual art extremes Extremes of vibrant hues Extremes that amuse the muse Muse expresses your view Muse reveals what is true True atmospheric perspective True verses reflective Reflective Avant-Garde poetry Reflective creative artistry Artistry has a secret guise Artistry intrigues the eyes Eyes are an anonymous anatomy Eyes are an expressionism alchemy Alchemy creates aesthetic idealism Alchemy is impressionism realism Realism is seen in scriptures Realism changes with cultures Cultures keep you believing Cultures inspire word weaving Word weaving helps spirits Word weaving has no limits Limits destroy creativity Limits kill positivity Positivity brings balance Positivity ends silence Silence is unsung Silence needs a tongue Tongue is not weak Tongue needs to speak Speak within papyrus poetry Speak through vivid potency Potency Poetry A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim. Here are the rules: Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”) Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”) Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2 as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be “house for rent”) Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4 as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48 Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47 The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47) There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipse after the final two words in lines 49 & 50. Blitz does not rhyme, but I wanted to challenge myself with one that rhymes.

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Date: 1/16/2024 9:25:00 AM
Wow
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Date: 12/12/2023 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win on brians contest. Well deserved, i knew brian would love this.
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Date: 12/10/2023 4:15:00 AM
Amazing poem. I might try this sometime, but it takes much thought! Love reading this. God bless you my sweet friend. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/10/2023 3:06:00 AM
Wow, this form is really creative and you've woven such powerful words in a very wonderful way here, looks so attractive to read especially with the flow! I love so many lines here like "Alchemy creates aesthetic idealism,Alchemy is impressionism realism", "Picasso's pencil was gold,Picasso's palette was bold" Amazing rhymes chosen here, as always, you've woven this with incredible perfection! I think I never knew about Blitz style poem until I read this.. Wow, a new form I learnt :)
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Date: 12/9/2023 5:11:00 PM
intuitive thought flow, unrestricted, playful - enjoyed this
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Date: 12/9/2023 4:33:00 PM
Amazing, truly! Thought provoking with brilliant phrases and imagery. The title is perfect! You're just awesome...enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Date: 12/9/2023 1:06:00 PM
Quite the creative undertaking ! Very stimulating.
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Date: 12/9/2023 12:16:00 PM
Exceptional penning, Silent One. Glad to have read your exquisite writing of the Blitz form. I dabbled but never made a go of it, mayhaps, thanks to your inspiration--tempting. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/9/2023 10:08:00 AM
oh my has my mind going in circles and not one I think I would like to try. May be more frustrating that soothing. lol Have a great weekend. love phyl
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Date: 12/9/2023 6:44:00 AM
Ah i love blitz, and i remember you introducing this on insta lol. We did a collab too, blitz, i should post that maybe. I absolutely love this one so many brilliant phrases. And it flows so well and the last two lines are brilliant. Did you just write this? “ Word weaving helps spirits Word weaving has no limits Limits destroy creativity Limits kill positivity“ ah i agree with this but it also helps. I like limits cus i can go on and on as you know. It helps me to be concise and disciplined:)
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