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What Is Love ?

Love is a silohated painting behind a stream of tears , feelings struggled to be confessed for months or maybe years , the igniting spark that brings great flames deep inside the heart , saves you from a lonely life for those once in the dark.

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 1:38:00 AM

Lovely write Michael I am new to writing as well even though I am a music teacher I am sure there are better qualified people than I to tell you if you have what it takes ... but .... I loved this for someone so young you so much promise in my opinion and your only young you nurse your talent let it grow as with anything ... something will flourish just like this poem ... Love Jayne

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2009 3:04:00 PM

Very wise words from one who is just 17, Michael!! If you sign up for Soup Mail, I would like to talk to you about your publishing efforts. Love, Carolyn

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/24/2009 1:37:00 PM

You are a new comer....I hope you write more! I like your style....it's newly fresh~ Your comments on my poem were nice and I wanted to say thanks for reading it~ It feels good to read and to write poetry, and it has become a type of therapy for most soupers. I like to get constructive with some of my comments and want and usually ask for critisizm because I want to find the perfect word or way of saying what I want to say! The soup is cool!~Keep writing Mr. C! :)your friend at the soupie!~Jane

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/24/2009 1:31:00 PM

Ahhhhhhh the feeling of love!~ Just beautiful writing! WOW~ The 1st similie is the best for me. I loved every word, I especially liked the form that you created. Bravo Mr.C~ "Love is not lust" ~It bites hard! Enjoy the love that surrounds you in life, it's a vibe that you will come to love and need, it comes from inside yourself..Self-Love! Discover who you are by not allowing yourself to need another to feel complete~ no one would ever hurt your heart again! Always a friend at the soupie~ Jane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/24/2009 12:26:00 PM

Let this candle burn slowly, it will give light to all who read. Love