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What Is In a Name

Either silent or eloquent A name there must be To be a speck in the infinity Without the speck, high or low Where the heck you can go So I have a name too Denoting both red and blue The colours of courage To struggle in the race Of pleasant survival It is elimination in namelessness Disintegration like disgrace A shame It is integration in a name Sometimes toward the hall of fame May be in a global group Or at least in Poetry Soup So I have a name too In order to be distinct to you In dark and dew Though doubtful in poetry soup Again a disintegration in a name too In the zoo Of religion, cast and creed Instruments of power and greed Namelessness here might eliminate The black holes of disregard and hate I dislike the surname of my name Indicative of higher caste claim A profound nonsense In Indian culture A rose or a non-rose A name must be there To get close and warm Into your charm Silent or eloquent Strong or faint In paint or poetry Alone or in a tremor of chemistry Mere you and I will not do We need a name In the eternal game Hence my name Pointing towards radiance and spirit Though I am nowhere near it Still trying for some resolution Of restless conflict _____________________________ 17/01/2017 Silent One’s Poetry Contest What’s in a name

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Date: 1/19/2017 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Probir. Nicely written.
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Date: 1/19/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, Janis ... probir ...
Date: 1/19/2017 1:49:00 PM
lovely poem Probir..congrats! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/19/2017 9:47:00 PM
Aww, ... A nice visit after quite sometime, Laura ...thank you, ... probir
Date: 1/18/2017 12:57:00 AM
Your poetry is very inspiring, Sir, for learners like me.
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:07:00 AM
Very good ... in that case my poetry has had a little utility too ... thank you, my young friend ...
Date: 1/17/2017 5:58:00 PM
Here in Ireland your name often gives away your religion. Just as you have said about caste. It's strange how powerful a name can be. Good luck in the contest Probir.
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:20:00 AM
I am very close to being an atheist ... For me journey toward godhead is an achievement towards human perfection . Thank you for reading and liking my poem, Jean ... probir ...
Date: 1/17/2017 11:47:00 AM
Very spiritual and compelling poem, Probir. Such grace, humility and truth emanating from your illuminating words. Though I would dare intercede on your behalf in this one thing ... we all being children of God, are descendants of the Highest royalty, not man-made forms of superiority. Such a beautifully written poem. Ty for sharing your views on names w/us. Love and peace to you always.
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:25:00 AM
Your comment is the proof that poetry is subjective in nature, both for for the poet and the reader ... and the perspective may very much vary ... Thank you so much for taking an interest in my poems ... probir
Date: 1/17/2017 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful write, Probir. It is an uncommon name here but I think it's a great name that suits you well:)
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Date: 1/17/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 1/17/2017 7:48:00 AM
What a monumental denotation and connotation of a name dear, Brobir! A seven!
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Date: 1/17/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 1/17/2017 12:52:00 AM
There is beauty in a name, and significance too, just like this poem. Well done. I found this most interesting. JH
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Date: 1/17/2017 5:17:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Date: 1/17/2017 12:04:00 AM
You have a unique name, Probir:) this poem is indeed brilliant:)
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Date: 1/17/2017 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jo ... probir ...
Date: 1/16/2017 11:45:00 PM
Brilliant, Probir, Brilliant!
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Date: 1/17/2017 5:19:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...

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