What If

Days are like soap bubbles
Nights, like the freight train
rumbling through a ghost town

Of late,
My heart beats grudgingly,
Daily chore, a Sisyphean task
Writing is an ordeal 
the letters appear like ants
scrambling for bread crumbs,
A straight line ends up wavy
and out of place,
I walk with a pebble in my shoe,
And tagging along everywhere 
is a nagging fear…

What if?


~11/28/22
~Contest: A Brian Strand Premiere #53
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 9:53 AM
What if...if only. Very nice write Abdul Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 5:32 AM
- What a thought ... like soap bubbles ... lovely poem, Abdul - Congratulations on your win -
Mandani Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 4:19 AM
Ohhhhh!! Those What If's running through one's head. Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
Mandani Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Sara.
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