What I Yearn To Be

Let me be, as God intended me to be:
Neither a wicked elf, nor a fairy godmother,
Never a demon, nor an angel,
But a true woman.

Never, I yearn to be the ‘Phenomenal Woman’
Of Maya Angelou,
Drawing a hive of honey bees round
‘With the span of my hips
Or the stride of my steps’
But,
One with a loving heart,
Calm and caring,
Though at times touchy and itchy

I yearn to be:

A gracious host and a helpful neighbor
An all time student and a teacher
Able to stand in my own light
And lessen the darkness of the night

I yearn to be:

An abiding spouse in whom my man can see
An ocean of love in my dewy eyes
And feel the steady warmth of my grip
When the seas of life grow stormy,

I yearn to be:

An adorable mother to my children
In whom they can confide,
Their doubt, despair or delight
A counselor, a friend and guide
With the balm to heal their wounds
Touch and move their spirits
And show them the miracle of love

Piecing together these different roles
Let me into a close knit texture weave
The fabric of my life,
Like the interlacing threads
Of a great tapestry!

In a way, is not living the art of quilting
Bringing out unique patterns
Of exquisite beauty and delight
From the scraps thrown in our way!

Submitted for Bian Strand Free verse 
Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/5/2022 4:44:00 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2022 11:03:00 AM
What a gem, Valsa. I love the image of the quilt made up by the scraps of life "thrown our way" reflecting you, the authentic, accomplished woman of Proverbs 31 always making lemonade for family, friends and the greater community. Thank you for sharing this picture of you with us. Blessings to you!
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Date: 12/22/2021 11:40:00 AM
A "Wonderful" write. I love your line, "Let me be, as God intended me to be:" That is the answer. I think He has writing on His list for you. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:43:00 PM
It is commendable to want to be a "true woman" - this is a true woman's poem too. Incredible pen. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/2/2021 10:11:00 PM
Oh... I feel humbled ! I wish to be a true woman... ! How far I succeed, God alone knows ! Caren,I love your sportive spirit and your commitment as a poet ! Keep your unrivaled stature in Poetry Soup~~
Date: 12/2/2021 4:52:00 PM
you have wonderful aspirations and I bet you are all these things already. Constance ought to love this poem, Valsa . I see a winner!
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Date: 12/2/2021 10:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea.... a gifted poet and a ready winner! Your sweet words infuse confidence in me !
Date: 12/2/2021 2:09:00 PM
Accomplishing all of the things you yearn to be, you will have lived an astonishingly, fulfilled life and you will know you have been so loved!
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Date: 12/2/2021 10:05:00 PM
That way I am satisfied in life. With average qualities and average accomplishments and a lot of love around I have been happy so far. Thank you so much Milton !
Date: 12/2/2021 2:07:00 PM
I see you a true woman with true feelings, Valsa.. You are the one you have been building, shaping, awakening.. ever a learner seeking deeper awareness, understanding, tolerance and endurance.. A human soul of oceanic beauty and sentiments more than can suffice precious souls who are dear to your heart.. You are a poetess of grand calibre who touches souls and awakens minds.. A true poetess who renders in fine poetry the voice of so many human souls who would relate to who you are and what you yearn to.. What an immense delight to read your gems dear friend.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
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Valsa George
Date: 12/2/2021 10:01:00 PM
Oh, Besma....I am awed by the brilliance of your pen strokes. You are such a gifted writer. Your prose and poetry alike keep a certain level that no ordinary language user can aspire to have. I am not an epitome of such great qualities, you invest on me. Let me repeat, a very ordinary person with some qualities of the heart. Thanks dear for your wonderful words. Love and Warmest Regards
Date: 12/2/2021 10:48:00 AM
I like your version much more than, "Be all you can be in the U.S. Army" . . . .
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Date: 12/2/2021 9:54:00 PM
This is an ordinary woman's version and yearnings about life and not of those in the ranks dazzled by power and authority. Thank you Rico
Date: 12/2/2021 6:04:00 AM
This is wonderful, Valsa, You don't mention poetry, here, and a need not too, one having read a beautiful positive poem, one a poetic gem.
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Date: 12/2/2021 9:51:00 PM
I feel so delighted with this wonderful feedback from a veteran poet like you, harry
Date: 12/2/2021 5:21:00 AM
I like your reference to Maya Angelo--she was a brilliant poet and spoke of disadvantaged life due to ills of society--her emotions resounded in her poems. You have the ideals of a great human being as expressed through your yearnings through this poem my friend. Superb metaphor--living the art of quilting!
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Date: 12/2/2021 9:49:00 PM
Indeed Maya was a wonderful poet.... ! A sapling that found its way through the maze of tangles, briny weeds, shadowy woods and grew into a towering oak! Her courage and self confidence made her the voice of suppressed humanity ! Thanks a lot Vijay for our wonderful feed back.
Date: 12/2/2021 2:53:00 AM
Isn't it amazing what treasures people throw away and what one can weave from something as simple as a thread, I enjoyed your poem very much :)
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Date: 12/2/2021 4:03:00 AM
Yes, you are absolutely right Rose. Even a thread thrown away can make beautiful patterns. Glad that you liked my poem. Thanks a lot !
Date: 12/2/2021 1:34:00 AM
I'm sure you're already there Valsa, good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 12/2/2021 4:00:00 AM
Striving, striving.... can't say I have reached there. 'It's better to have tried and lost than never to have tried at all'. Thanks a lot Tom. Have a great week ahead !
Date: 12/2/2021 12:55:00 AM
I love the positive way you wrote this poem. We all yearn to live a good life and shun all evil. Well done. Best for a win.
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Date: 12/2/2021 3:54:00 AM
Yes, playing well the part assigned to us is our calling in life ! Trying to do as best as I can, though may not succeed always. Thanks a lot dear friend for your prompt response...
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