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What I Couldn'T Leave Behind

I woke smelling smoke as I lay in bed Suddenly my mind was filled with great dread From my window I could see flames leaping So much had been lost as I was sleeping With heat and pungent smoke my house was rife Decided to jump out to save my life ‘Twas then I heard my cat starting to choke My compassion little Boots did evoke I grabbed her up quickly in my left arm Together we jumped, saving us from harm Gems aplenty in my jewelry box In a room filled with priceless antique clocks But Boots meant more than all of these combined She was one thing I could not leave behind *Entry for Kristen's "Last Chance" contest Written January 17, 2012

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Date: 1/19/2012 2:00:00 PM
A cat lover. Wonderful! What would I do, though, with ten cats? I would probably go down with the ship, cats and all. Love, daver
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Date: 1/19/2012 2:35:00 AM
Good entry here Carolyn.. i looked to see if i could mail you but couldn't see the logo..) i will be off for a while..! take care Joe..)
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:57:00 PM
My, scary experience, my friend - so glad you and little Boots escaped. Excellent write, as always. I hadn't realised you'd been posting - will read them all tomorrow xx
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:22:00 PM
Exciting write here Carolyn ! I had that experience moons ago, yet with my iguana. Miss ya dear friend ! Have a blessed week...much love, james
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:57:00 AM
Well if you ever decided to tell us about yourself, this poem says all. it how i've always seen you anyway. love this. harry
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Date: 1/18/2012 1:40:00 AM
Very nice Carolyn.I would have done the same.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/17/2012 5:14:00 PM
This poem brought a tear to my eye Carolyn...to save the precious cat's life, yes that is of highest priority! I don't have a pet so I took my ever precious laptop with me...very important! Your poem was written very well and brought a lot of emotion with it! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/17/2012 1:48:00 PM
A powerful poem, rife with emotions and great storytelling. That having been said it also has a lot of great metaphors open for reader interpretation. Just the kind of poetry for me :). Excellent stuff Mrs. Carolyn.
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Date: 1/17/2012 1:36:00 PM
Carolyn this brought tears to my eyes. Wow-so powerful. I can't even imagine hearing Tiki choke on smoke. I'd also give up all material possessions to save the little guy. BTW-DH took your book to work-he reads it on all of his breaks and is just lovin' it. I told him he better finish soon so I can start on it :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 1:15:00 PM
Smile ˜ Sooo loving my dear beautiful Carolyn ˜ Bless your loving and precious heart for saving priceless little Boot's life ˜ Prioritize I always say and what is the material compared unto this, beauty ¥ My love, John!:) ˜
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Date: 1/17/2012 1:06:00 PM
aww beautiful written and god bles you and nice to see you here carolyn its been a while LOL
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