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Frolicking minds under benevolent skies Set into motion spectacular emotions Painting orange hues on silken textiles As lovers embark on a path to paradise Horizon bends listening to ocean tidings Emanating from voices of rippling images When twilight beams refract under water Echoing messages of enchanting dreams Hearing urgent call of resonant hearts Birds organize display of intricate charm Saluting the promise of ardent evening Flying in unison with articulate response Fervent vibes awaken to love's divinity Surrendering to onset of sensual feelings Rejoicing a kiss amid wordless dialogue Holding each other in a reveling trance Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance Urging love to advance amorous stance Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance As pier dims silently in each other's arms Receiving a signal from supernal promise Two souls merge heeding destiny's advice Captivated by sentiments of eternal bliss Excited to explore what heaven feels like March 25, 2018 Picture this contest by Joseph May Image 3 Placed 3rd

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Date: 7/14/2023 8:16:00 PM
"Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance/ Urging love to advance amorous stance/ Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance/ As pier dims silently in each other's arms".... Beautiful stanza Enjoyed this deep romance of 'wordless dialogue"! As ever, a lovely poem on love.
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:45:00 PM
This is indeed poetry at its best Vijay. Hi my friend, this is a journey through emotions that I am glad to take. I love both the content and the imagery in this wonderful write. Your words paint such a glowing canvas of living thoughts. Exceptional my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/11/2018 9:54:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Vijay. Well deserved.
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:59:00 AM
Well painted and penned, straight through the end, Vijay, with my favourite verse being verse #5. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
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Date: 4/1/2018 11:03:00 AM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:28:00 AM
Back with congratulations! Yay! :) xomo!
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:16:00 AM
"The heart to heart rhythm of romance"...Congrats on your win Vijay
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Date: 3/31/2018 9:39:00 AM
An awesome write, Vijay! Delightful imagery, love and surrender combine to produce a heavenly atmosphere. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/28/2018 7:12:00 AM
Beautifully written Vijay, artfully expressed and flawless....Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:21:00 AM
Many thanks Maria..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/27/2018 7:29:00 PM
beautiful write, Vijay, enjoyed reading. Bless you on a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Eve..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/27/2018 5:20:00 PM
Great write Vijay, you have a painter's mind;-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Keith..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/27/2018 3:50:00 PM
ohh, flawless depiction of a love so glorious... yes, heavenly is this poem, vijay.. huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you nette.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 3/27/2018 3:52:00 PM
re-read it!..:)
Date: 3/26/2018 10:16:00 PM
Your poem so eloquently describes this picture Vijay...wonderful write :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Chris.
Date: 3/26/2018 10:02:00 PM
Great poem ... Great images ... Great read ... Perhaps a winner ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:46:00 PM
I think image 3 is going to be the most popular one from what I am seeing around Soup. Very nice, VIjay. You have a romantic spirit. I was going to do this one as well until I thought up something for the butterfly picture!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/26/2018 2:43:00 PM
Sounds so romantic, you really must be a master in wooing a woman... Great poem, good luck in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 4:45:00 PM
Many thanks Silent One..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:15:00 AM
Absolutely superb, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 1:50:00 PM
Many thanks Janice.. appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/26/2018 7:52:00 AM
Vijay, you DO have a way with romance!! I love "heeding destiny's advise" A great entry, Good Luck !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 1:50:00 PM
Many thanks Mike..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/26/2018 6:21:00 AM
Two hears dance within the sphere of love inspired by divinity! Superbly expressed my friend! Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, my friend.
Date: 3/26/2018 4:59:00 AM
There's certainly a bit of Heaven there...Lovely little piece...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:37:00 AM
Appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Arturo.
Date: 3/26/2018 2:23:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and heart touching write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 3/25/2018 11:58:00 PM
Vijay this is a beautiful piece of poetry, good luck in contest, a winning poem for me. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:36:00 AM
Many thanks Roy--appreciate your kind words.
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