Notes About The Poem

What Heaven Feels Like

Frolicking minds under benevolent skies
Set into motion spectacular emotions
Painting orange hues on silken textiles
As lovers embark on a path to paradise

Horizon bends listening to ocean tidings
Emanating from voices of rippling images
When twilight beams refract under water
Echoing messages of enchanting dreams

Hearing urgent call of resonant hearts
Birds organize display of intricate charm
Saluting the promise of ardent evening
Flying in unison with articulate response 

Fervent vibes awaken to love's divinity
Surrendering to onset of sensual feelings  
Rejoicing a kiss amid wordless dialogue
Holding each other in a reveling trance

Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance
Urging love to advance amorous stance
Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance
As pier dims silently in each other's arms

Receiving a signal from supernal promise
Two souls merge heeding destiny's advice
Captivated by sentiments of eternal bliss
Excited to explore what heaven feels like

March 25, 2018
Picture this contest by Joseph May
Image 3
Placed 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 8:16 PM
"Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance/ Urging love to advance amorous stance/ Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance/ As pier dims silently in each other's arms".... Beautiful stanza Enjoyed this deep romance of 'wordless dialogue"! As ever, a lovely poem on love.
Raven Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 6:45 PM
This is indeed poetry at its best Vijay. Hi my friend, this is a journey through emotions that I am glad to take. I love both the content and the imagery in this wonderful write. Your words paint such a glowing canvas of living thoughts. Exceptional my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Vijay. Well deserved.
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Well painted and penned, straight through the end, Vijay, with my favourite verse being verse #5. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
Canerdy Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 11:03 AM
I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:30 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Back with congratulations! Yay! :) xomo!
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:16 AM
"The heart to heart rhythm of romance"...Congrats on your win Vijay
Callus Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 9:39 AM
An awesome write, Vijay! Delightful imagery, love and surrender combine to produce a heavenly atmosphere. Regards // paul
Williams Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Beautifully written Vijay, artfully expressed and flawless....Maria
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Many thanks Maria..appreciate your kind words.
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 7:29 PM
beautiful write, Vijay, enjoyed reading. Bless you on a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Eve..appreciate your visit and comments.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Great write Vijay, you have a painter's mind;-)
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Keith..appreciate your visit and comments.
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 3:50 PM
ohh, flawless depiction of a love so glorious... yes, heavenly is this poem, vijay.. huggs
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Thank you nette.
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 3:52 PM
re-read it!..:)
Hagy Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Your poem so eloquently describes this picture Vijay...wonderful write :)
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Thank you Chris.
Gupta Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Great poem ... Great images ... Great read ... Perhaps a winner ...
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Probir.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:46 PM
I think image 3 is going to be the most popular one from what I am seeing around Soup. Very nice, VIjay. You have a romantic spirit. I was going to do this one as well until I thought up something for the butterfly picture!
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Andrea...appreciate your kind words.
One Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Sounds so romantic, you really must be a master in wooing a woman... Great poem, good luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Many thanks Silent One..appreciate your kind feedback.
Canerdy Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Absolutely superb, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Many thanks Janice.. appreciate your kind feedback.
Gentile Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Vijay, you DO have a way with romance!! I love "heeding destiny's advise" A great entry, Good Luck !!!
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Many thanks Mike..appreciate your kind feedback.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Two hears dance within the sphere of love inspired by divinity! Superbly expressed my friend! Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, my friend.
Michael Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 4:59 AM
There's certainly a bit of Heaven there...Lovely little piece...All the best Vijay
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Arturo.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and heart touching write. Enjoyed reading it.
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your visit and kind feedback.
Pett Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 11:58 PM
Vijay this is a beautiful piece of poetry, good luck in contest, a winning poem for me. :))
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Many thanks Roy--appreciate your kind words.
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