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What Heaven Feels Like

Frolicking minds under benevolent skies
Set into motion spectacular emotions
Painting orange hues on silken textiles
As lovers embark on a path to paradise

Horizon bends listening to ocean tidings
Emanating from voices of rippling images
When twilight beams refract under water
Echoing messages of enchanting dreams

Hearing urgent call of resonant hearts
Birds organize display of intricate charm
Saluting the promise of ardent evening
Flying in unison with articulate response 

Fervent vibes awaken to love's divinity
Surrendering to onset of sensual feelings  
Rejoicing a kiss amid wordless dialogue
Holding each other in a reveling trance

Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance
Urging love to advance amorous stance
Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance
As pier dims silently in each other's arms

Receiving a signal from supernal promise
Two souls merge heeding destiny's advice
Captivated by sentiments of eternal bliss
Excited to explore what heaven feels like

March 25, 2018
Picture this contest by Joseph May
Image 3
Placed 3rd

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Valsa George Date: 7/14/2023 8:16:00 PM "Hearing heart to heart rhythmic romance/ Urging love to advance amorous stance/ Parting sun twinkles a retreating glance/ As pier dims silently in each other's arms".... Beautiful stanza Enjoyed this deep romance of 'wordless dialogue"! As ever, a lovely poem on love. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/17/2018 6:45:00 PM This is indeed poetry at its best Vijay. Hi my friend, this is a journey through emotions that I am glad to take. I love both the content and the imagery in this wonderful write. Your words paint such a glowing canvas of living thoughts. Exceptional my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/11/2018 9:54:00 PM Congrats on your podium finish, Vijay. Well deserved. Login to Reply

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly Date: 4/3/2018 4:59:00 AM Well painted and penned, straight through the end, Vijay, with my favourite verse being verse #5. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 4/1/2018 10:40:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/1/2018 11:03:00 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 4/1/2018 9:14:00 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay! :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 8:30:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/1/2018 8:28:00 AM Back with congratulations! Yay! :) xomo! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/1/2018 7:16:00 AM "The heart to heart rhythm of romance"...Congrats on your win Vijay Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/31/2018 9:39:00 AM An awesome write, Vijay! Delightful imagery, love and surrender combine to produce a heavenly atmosphere. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 3/28/2018 7:12:00 AM Beautifully written Vijay, artfully expressed and flawless....Maria Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2018 7:21:00 AM Many thanks Maria..appreciate your kind words.

Eve Roper Date: 3/27/2018 7:29:00 PM beautiful write, Vijay, enjoyed reading. Bless you on a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2018 7:20:00 AM Thank you Eve..appreciate your visit and comments.

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 3/27/2018 5:20:00 PM Great write Vijay, you have a painter's mind;-) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2018 7:20:00 AM Thank you Keith..appreciate your visit and comments.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2018 3:50:00 PM ohh, flawless depiction of a love so glorious... yes, heavenly is this poem, vijay.. huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2018 5:00:00 PM Thank you nette. Nette Onclaud Date: 3/27/2018 3:52:00 PM re-read it!..:)

Chris Hagy Date: 3/26/2018 10:16:00 PM Your poem so eloquently describes this picture Vijay...wonderful write :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2018 5:00:00 PM Thank you Chris.

Probir Gupta Date: 3/26/2018 10:02:00 PM Great poem ... Great images ... Great read ... Perhaps a winner ... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2018 4:59:00 PM Thank you Probir.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2018 8:46:00 PM I think image 3 is going to be the most popular one from what I am seeing around Soup. Very nice, VIjay. You have a romantic spirit. I was going to do this one as well until I thought up something for the butterfly picture! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2018 4:59:00 PM Thank you Andrea...appreciate your kind words.

Silent One Date: 3/26/2018 2:43:00 PM Sounds so romantic, you really must be a master in wooing a woman... Great poem, good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 4:45:00 PM Many thanks Silent One..appreciate your kind feedback.

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/26/2018 8:15:00 AM Absolutely superb, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 1:50:00 PM Many thanks Janice.. appreciate your kind feedback.

Mike Gentile Date: 3/26/2018 7:52:00 AM Vijay, you DO have a way with romance!! I love "heeding destiny's advise" A great entry, Good Luck !!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 1:50:00 PM Many thanks Mike..appreciate your kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/26/2018 6:21:00 AM Two hears dance within the sphere of love inspired by divinity! Superbly expressed my friend! Good luck! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 7:38:00 AM Thank you for your visit and kind words, my friend.

Arturo Michael Date: 3/26/2018 4:59:00 AM There's certainly a bit of Heaven there...Lovely little piece...All the best Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 7:37:00 AM Appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Arturo.

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/26/2018 2:23:00 AM Excellent. Beautiful and heart touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 7:37:00 AM Thank you Ravi--appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Roy Pett Date: 3/25/2018 11:58:00 PM Vijay this is a beautiful piece of poetry, good luck in contest, a winning poem for me. :)) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 7:36:00 AM Many thanks Roy--appreciate your kind words.

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