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* The picture is from one of my favorite children's books, "Burt Dow, Deep Water Man", written by the great Robert McCloskey, (who I was lucky enough to meet) ... he loved my home state of Maine, and spent summers here with his family. *

What He Gets For Empty Nets

The old fisherman sat in his dory

Empty nets, but concocting a story

It would sure mean his life

Should he greet his young wife

At the dock without financial quarry.


Now his wife was as fit as could be

With the girth and the might of a tree

He considered her ire

Then began to perspire

And headed his boat ... out to sea.





~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Tax & Finance Limericks - Old or New" Poetry Contest, Carolyn Devonshire, Judge & Sponsor.
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Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Barden Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so much, Susan! :-) <3
Laurie Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:35 AM
G'day Gregory … he should be using gelignite bait. At least he would have brought home something to his fearful wife - thank you Gregory - Lindsay
Barden Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so very much, Lindsay - sounds great! :-)
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Charming! I can just imagine the wrath of that fisherman's wife, as you've set the scene just right. Best always, Gershon
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Gershon, I'm really glad you liked this one! Nice to see you "around" again, my friend - blessings!
Wood Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Greg, This is superbly written. The meter, the rhyme and the tale; all first rate! Dean
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:02 PM
That's very kind of you, Dean, I'm pleased you enjoyed it, friend! Blessings! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:45 AM
LOL! Great tale! Congratulations, Greg!
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, I'm pleased it made you smile! :-) <3
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Jan, and so appreciated! :-) <3
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Love it, Greg!! Congrats on your win. So far, I am really enjoying these!!
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea - I can't wait to read some. Blessings! :-) <3
Wanter Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Poor man! Now we know why he chose to be a fisherman.
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:59 PM
Ha! Indeed, SW - well-said! :-)
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:42 AM
very witty Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Thanks, Dear Jan - blessings! :-) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Ha! Cute!!! Good luck love <3 xomo!
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Thank you very much, Mo! :-) <3
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