What Goes Around...

Restless shaking
is all that divides
the two equal realms
that exist between
heaven and hell,
between sleep and 
slumber;
the utmost plane
sought to by the
Shroud himself, 
creeping inside
the Gates of Peter,
influencing free will
and leg-locked choice.
Time passes like a
youngsters basketball
through traffic, with 
brooding afterthoughts;
yet praying the wet
road dries,
the car grows ABS,
or the driver had one less
beer than he thought. 
Loose ends entangle 
themselves in the "Patient Spider's"
web,
because eventually
the soul-searching moth will fly
towards the light,
creating ****** out of
ignorance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 4, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 4, 2010 at 2:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Anthony. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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February 25, 2010 at 12:55 PM
wow anthony this poem was fantastic i loved reading it, it was clever with great imagery and metaphors, also i could teell you put alot of thought into this and it came out perfect.Jo
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October 24, 2009 at 6:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Anthony. I look forward to reading more of it. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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