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What evil are they up to with those silent lights blinking blinking blinking red blue green orange silver vanishing into nothing as suddenly as they appeared, leaving me to question how demented am I? Perhaps it isn't evil they intend, perhaps it's simple acknowledgment; in a vast universe they and we are not the only intelligences looking up or looking down, though connection cannot be made in either realm. My dreams have turned to otherworlds, otherworlds I don't understand and which remain, for now, unknowable.

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Date: 1/2/2024 10:52:00 AM
The poem leaves the reader with a lingering sense of curiosity and a touch of existential reflection. The ambiguity surrounding the silent lights and the narrator's dreams fosters an atmosphere of wonder and contemplation, encouraging readers to reflect on the mysteries that may lie beyond our immediate understanding.. It effectively engages with the theme of the unknown, leaving the reader with a sense of intrigue and thoughtful reflection..
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Chetta Achara
Date: 1/2/2024 11:20:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your feedback.

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