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What Do You See

What do you see? His words still haunt me to this day 6 years ago I followed the biggest trend Because his words crept in my head reminding me I wasn’t “beautiful enough” I picked up the brush thinking it would give me more self-esteem But left me with more insecurities Looking in the mirror still not satisfied I became so consumed into making myself into what he considered “good enough” I cried knowing the brush won’t fix my imperfections Ugly donkey was what he saw What do you see?

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Date: 5/7/2018 10:27:00 AM
True; everyone is beautiful in his or her own way. Don't get caught up in looks just take care of yourself and be good to you -JT
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Date: 2/28/2018 10:28:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, always remember that everyone is beautiful in his/her own way, some have beautiful face while others have beautiful heart, don t abuse yourself by comparing yourself with others, see the positives that don t care what the world say, they ll always speak, hust have faith that you re beautiful and don t care what rhe world say, and you ll realize that you re happy then, a warm welcome to poetrysoup
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:17:00 AM
heartfelt. we are all beautiful unique. I see talent! Welcome to the soup!!
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Date: 2/13/2018 2:35:00 PM
The donkey who spoke to you was he...I like your line,"What do you see?" Although I would prefer...Who did I see...All the best Brianna
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