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What Do You Hear

I took my students outside Told them to be still They looked at me in wonder Outside of the classroom What was teacher up to this time? I whispered…. “What do you hear?” The booming of the cicadas In the pine trees on campus Drowned everything else out They smiled…. “Write….write about the sounds you hear Nature has a voice What does it tell you? How does it make you feel?” Today, as I lie on my living room couch Laptop on belly In my own world of words I look out the window To a over towering pine tree My little Africa, I’ve called it The branches curve like the western side Of that continent The tree is ALIVE Little cicadas….irrespective of size Boom a symphony Dying to be heard The rhythm of summer Maddening chorus Made by body vibrations Part of the mystical magic Of the pine scented trees that Surround my home I too need to be heard For some…the sound will be monotonous For others…a pulsating melody of a body, a mind set in motion By dreams, desires, wants, hopes, expectations By LIFE A short life span has the cicada…. I, too, am here today, gone tomorrow But I will not be silent You may like the “music” I make Think it heavenly Soothing Lulling Enough to make you dream sweet dreams Or You may find it aggravating Bothersome Vulgar and loud Whatever the case may be That’s me…. Singing in the tree of life Singing because I know I too will have to go But you cannot silence my voice I sing for me… I sing for you… I sing for anyone willing to hear The vibrations of my soul I sing because.... I'm dying to be heard I sing because Simply because.... I’m ALIVE… Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 8/17/2013 12:04:00 AM
wonderful poem. And yes I concur with linda. Never stop singing.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2013 6:32:00 AM
Thanks, Jon...I will try not to...sometimes the going gets tough, but......I'll be a thorn bird and sing even when impaled! :)
Date: 8/16/2013 9:33:00 AM
Heard about some bad stuff going on over there... you are safe I hope1 :( Be careful dear lady1 Hugs and much love xoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2013 6:33:00 AM
Love ya, Kenny! You are a sweetie pie! I'm Ok...it's far from where I live. Right now the situation in Egypt is making us worried....hubby has relatives there. :(
Date: 8/16/2013 3:12:00 AM
you are wonderful Eileen, I embrace your poem, and write. never stop singing. ..love the poem Richard dedicated in your honor. .. Queen Yes indeed. ..linda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2013 4:04:00 AM
Thanks for the words of affirmation, Linda. You are one of the giants on this site....Don't go leaving....As for Richard's poem...I'm so touched by it. He is a mentor to me...always encouraging me to try to reach higher highest, to enter contest, to believe in myself...which at times isn't an easy task. He is dear to me and gives more praise than I deserve, but I'm not complaining....Thanks for stopping by...Getting ready for a big family outing. Will get to your new poem soon...:-D
Date: 8/15/2013 9:30:00 PM
You have made a beautiful contrast with your internal and external voice. Nice poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:13:00 PM
Christine, I'm glad you liked it, and I thank you for your kind comment. :)
Date: 8/15/2013 1:50:00 PM
so auditory and complemented with strong, expressive images, eileen... yeaah, my kinda stuff!.: ) huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 2:17:00 PM
:) That is high praise indeed! Thanks, Nette! :)
Date: 8/15/2013 11:23:00 AM
I love this. Can you imagine - if we were all deaf - we could not enjoy the beautiful sounds of the world. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 2:19:00 PM
I've always wanted to work with deaf people....I learned sign language one summer when I was in the States....I've forgotten it. I need to brush up. Yes...the loss of sight or vision would be devastating....Thanks for visiting, Lucilla!
Date: 8/15/2013 10:34:00 AM
Hello Vulgar and Loud haha, Bothersome, you, really lol, No 5 is ALIVE and don't we know it lol, your never monotonous my little Desert Orchid, your driven and that's a good thing. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:18:00 PM
Oh Mr Seal....of the whole poem...you go and pick out these two words. You are naughty to the CORE!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRR....what to do with you? My talons are getting in the way of my typing....NO 5 will turn into a Transformer and come and devour you ALIVE....oh...Ok...just read the last bit of your post. You are forgiven, Mr Seal. Desert Orchid thanks ye kindly!
Date: 8/15/2013 9:17:00 AM
The songs you sing are on my all time Greatest Hits List. Keep on singing, there are people listening!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2013 6:31:00 AM
:) :) :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/16/2013 7:46:00 AM
Absolutely
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:22:00 PM
Richard...you DO know your audience! What an amazing post! All time greatest hits along with STING and Diana Krall and Marley? Thanks for stopping by with these words of encouragement.
Date: 8/15/2013 8:44:00 AM
Great comment by Drake... can't top that! Love and great big warm hugs sweet Teach! xoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:23:00 PM
Yes, that is a great comment by Drake! :) How are you, Jack???? Hope all is well. Teach sends ya warm hugs as well!!!! Your post is sweet and endearing!
Date: 8/15/2013 8:36:00 AM
To hear the sounds of the outer & inner voice, is to have truly attained clarity. Thus, giving one the ability to become a force of nature...and be not only "heard", but understood.
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:42:00 PM
=D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 11:13:00 PM
ok...It's morning...double checking that the post makes sense! :) Hope all is well, Drake!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2013 2:23:00 PM
Drake....I'm not a night person. My brain is totally useless at night. Wake me up at five in the morning, and everything is CRYSTAL clear...should I wait till then to post an answer? ;) Lovely....lovely comment....I want to be a force of nature so I can be "heard and understood". Thanks for visiting! Hugs!

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