What blooms after burning

She was a field–
soft, wide, aching.
He was the match,
small
but hungry. 

They met 
not in spring,
but in that breathless hush
before things grow–
where hope is still half-buried
beneath frost. 

She held the rain
like a secret.
He wore the fire
like a promise 
He never meant to keep. 

She broke
without a sound
He burned
like it was prayer. 

and yet–
in the blackened soil,
something small,
something stubborn
began to bloom.
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Swan Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 3:18 AM
And the first shoots after the fire are so unexpected and beautiful. The personification of field and match give double meanings and richness to your poem for me. I love your last lines especially: something stubborn /began to bloom. I also like how your poem feels like pages in a picture book. J :)
Vaso Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 11:50 PM
Beautiful, enjoyed this poem!
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