What Are You Typing

I have to deliberate an idea for about a month he said.
I began to type.
It forms slowly, sometimes in a painful way, he whines.
I am half listening.
Words are pinging onto the page with rapid precision.
I do not understand how anyone can write a worthwhile poem
in less than three weeks, he tells me.
Bam.
Poem number one is finished.
Sometimes I have to edit it nineteen times, he laments.
Whap!
Poem number two is done.
What are you typing? He asks me.
Anything my muse likes, I tell him. I just follow her lead.
Whack! Wham! Whim!
Poems 4, 5 and 6 are happily completed
while he gives me advice on how to write poetry.
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Hawkins Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:53 PM
Perhaps "he" meant this remark as a compliment. As I think you must amaze everyone at the ammount of poems you and Trixie write between you everyday, Your mind must always be working overtime with new ideas to write about. And you paint several pictures as well... Do you have the same hours in a day as the rest of us or have you got a time machine tucked away somewhere... Take 'His" remark as a well earned omplment...
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Wow! Lovely poem, Caren. "I do not understand how anyone can write a worthwhile poem in less than three weeks, he tells me" - whoever he is, is right in a way. Really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for visiting my page. Your comments touched my heart. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:56 PM
i wish I had Trixie especially when I was ill with Covid! your output is incredible and i love your work and no one can hold a candle to you :-) hugs Jan xx
Conn Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:01 PM
She's like me; We keep all the good ones to ourselves.
Bauer Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 1:17 PM
ha! you have nailed him in this poem, caren! i'd rather read 1,000 of your poems to his one, whoever he is...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 1:04 PM
LOL! Who is this bothersome person?
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