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The sepulcher within its confines hold a withering shell where once a grand life spent a journey both of joy and discontent - of pain and love and stories left untold. Too simple and complex I contemplate mortality where souls are briefly weighed, and conscience where the weight of sin is paid against a deed of good that came too late. So...what of death, a tax that must be paid, and measured by the value of my worth? It matters not - the plaintive cry "I tried" when even that was honest truth betrayed. Each day anew I celebrate my birth - and not regret a humble life that died...

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Date: 7/9/2024 4:54:00 AM
Awesome sonnet highlighting our sinful nature and the need to remember that a sacrifice was made in our behalf. Thx for supporting
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Date: 7/9/2024 2:38:00 AM
Quite a piece, CC. Worthy winner indeed. :o))
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:14:00 PM
Oh, wonderful writing. Enjoyed very much. It's so creative! God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:00:00 PM
'souls are weighed/ sin is paid' amazing philosophy dear poet. The thought of 'death as tax that must be paid' is overpowering. congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/8/2024 3:49:00 PM
only someone who not only lived a life but paid attention to the life they lived could write this poem of profound wisdom...
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Date: 7/8/2024 2:50:00 PM
Profound and wise write that flows in such soulful cadence. This fits the picture of present times perfectly too and the ending lines are so powerful! I also love “ a journey both of joy and discontent - of pain and love and stories left untold” cycle of life well depicted! “ Each day anew I celebrate my birth - and not regret a humble life that died.” Inspiring mindset.You do sonnets very well dear craigsz in such eloquence! Pleasure reading this poetic gem!
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