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we live in a world where so many pretend to be perfect yet, it is always a battle, resisting urges and temporary happiness over immortal bliss... 

i found the artwork by Paul Gauguin interesting, and I was looking at that for inspiration for the contest sponsored by Tom woody. 

As the midnight sun cries sweet honey, the mourning moon croons caramelized deceit, like toffee-speckled leaves, whistling bewitching myths, seducing silenced silhouettes, engrossed in tangerine temptations, and mundane melodies of tethered time. But are we not lost wanderers, knitting forbidden tales of life; an undone work of mystical art, transcribed in incoherent dialects; perfectly scarred and bruised, like wounded warriors on the quest for picturesque perspectives, we waltz through an endless realm, stuck in a translucent loop of daisy chains and dahlia links in lilac lace, counting crestfallen jewels of Lunar grace, thirsting for deep russet harvests, to feed the drained void in vain ignorance, unaware of the shallow seeds, emanating hypnotic hypocrisy. For we are, mere echoes of cosmic frequencies, orchestrated to compose sanguine serenades, by the divine virtuoso and angels of utopia. And I question the Goddess of the twilight pearl~ what will the stars sing of us, when constellations crack and bleed into eclipsed rivers of faded galaxies? Are we not all sinners, pretending to play wise, spoken from a past that knew paper butterflies, so fake that it deserves a Nobel Prize, for stealing sanity and leaving us paralyzed, while we are suppressing passion, we can barely recognize, rising to right the wrongs to neutralize. Aren’t we human? We break and bleed, pleading through pain, to pacify angst. Are we not tenants within temporary tranquility? Engrossed in timeless truth, revealed from the halcyon castle, with saffron scriptures, even the blind can read? I ponder, would we still thrive amongst remnants embalmed in jinxed jasmines, amidst roses, so radiant and divine? I know not what I sow, across forlorn fields, with herbs of fruitful weeds, to attain profound peace, while this heart still is searching for perfumed petals flickering serenity. As life here on earth, is a lavender landscape, designed with transformative tulips, twirling in tune to the ephemeral anthems of exotic existence. So what are we but caged dreamers, singing songs of begonia bliss, into the sombre breeze, like fragmented figurines, sculpted from galactic granules, soaring above virgin vines, stretching beyond skies gliding with luminous lies. Perhaps we are an emerald aftermath of an immutable saga, sewn with silver sinned dust, shimmering in ashes and bones, like contoured skeletons, blanketed in balanced duality; stainless wings of ivory doves, water and air merged in tumultuous depths, strumming violin visions, from bronze strings of unwavering faith and eternal light.

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Date: 7/13/2024 2:21:00 PM
Lots of questions. Life, experiences and emotions. Different things that we might be. You have such a great way with words and like always, I love your metaphors. You bring them to life and carry the depth and structure so well. This is a great piece, Dear Ink. With every new work, you exceed expectations. Beautiful writing. "we waltz through an endless realm, stuck in a translucent loop." I see the same. Like a repeated ritual. Congratulations Dear Ink.
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Date: 7/9/2024 1:13:00 AM
Beautiful poetry as always Ink, congratulations on your win in Tom’s contest… Beryl
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 9:56:00 AM
Dear beryl you are so kind and sweet, to support me always: i look up to you, so much admiration for your work
Date: 7/8/2024 10:10:00 PM
Congrats to you, my friend. God bless you once again. Love, Gina
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 10:45:00 AM
Thank you sweet gina
Date: 7/8/2024 9:46:00 PM
graceful dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/8/2024 7:30:00 PM
Awesome take on the theme Inky. So many great lines but my fave line is the last sentence in stanza two. "We are mere echoes of cosmic frequencies..." Poetry doesn't get much better than that
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 9:53:00 AM
Oh haha, i made it/ beyond honoured and grateful tomsz. I didnt know this painting existed before this contest so its very educational too. You always find such interesting themes, inspiring: thank you for placing me and also for the inspiration. Grateful for your support always
Date: 7/8/2024 3:47:00 PM
this is a comprehensive thesis on life expectations, challenges , and rebuttals...wonderful stock of images permeates through your lines, ink...spill ink!
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:51:00 PM
This is a very long poem about the concept of your perspective on what we are... Your beautifully created poem on the human condition, cosmic wonder, and the intricate dance between light and darkness. Through its rich imagery, evocative language, and profound themes, it offers a deeply introspective and emotionally resonant experience. The poem invites readers to reflect on their own lives, the nature of their existence, and the eternal quest for meaning and connection.
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:18:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, My dopamine in my brain flows whenever I see and read your poems. I felt like I got a lot of emotion out of this particular poem that conveys the deeper meanings of our human experience. You are like me, questioning the meaning of life and the role of fate and destiny. I loved reading the “Translucent Loop,” which is great poetry wordsmithing. We really do have a great deal of imperfections, and yet we wonder what the Divine Designer is shaping us for. Keep asking those questions and putting words behind them, which you do so well. A Fav because of all the philosophical musings. – Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 9:54:00 AM
Im so glad you liked it dear daniel thank you so very much for understanding my poem and for leaving such a heartfelt comment and yes sometimes i just sit and wonder:: hah. Appreciate your fave too always a pleasure
Date: 7/8/2024 1:32:00 AM
This line "unwavering faith and eternal light" is a great finale Your poem is full of magnificent alliterations and metaphors, so pleasing to the viewer. Light always.
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Date: 7/7/2024 9:58:00 PM
"So what are we but caged dreamers, singing songs of begonia bliss, into the sombre breeze, like fragmented figurines, sculpted from galactic granules," Reading this I am reminded of what Hamlet says about man... "What a piece of work is a man..... yet to me what is this quintessence of dust?" We do not know who we are....! Are we lost wanderers or wounded warriors or are we tenants within temporary tranquility or are we humans pleading through pain to pacify angst? Your search to know the real identity stretch endless and goes on and on. I can only stand gape mouthed as your quest progresses through innumerable, blasting metaphors and stunning images!
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 10:46:00 AM
Dear valsa, wow thats amazing to learn. Did you study english literature? I did but i didnt study hamlet but i did study other plays of shakespeare and im so happy to learn this about hamlet: thank you for sharing. And what a thoughtful comment as always. You make me feel like i am enough! I appreciate you truly
Date: 7/7/2024 8:08:00 PM
It was exquisite pleasure reading these beautiful lines, telling the tale of what we are, dear Ink. Although many imagery rich phrases thrilled me, I found the final verse to be stunningly lovely! This is in my faves.
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Date: 7/7/2024 8:00:00 PM
I predict a win. The picture sure did inspire from you beautiful lines that you wrote on what we are as humans. I am not into that kind of art so I took my inspiration from the spiritual videos I have been listening to
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Date: 7/7/2024 1:49:00 PM
...and so everything matters, a comfort that our journey will stay on? Beautiful work, dear Ink- loved the ending two things- "unwavering faith and eternal light"- perfect
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/9/2024 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet soul
Date: 7/7/2024 12:23:00 PM
As the midnight sun cries sweet honey, aaaah I can relate to this currently the midnight sun is crying sweet honey next to me aee … XD.. daisy chains , dahlia links in lilac lace, mmmm crestfallen jewels of Lunar grace, damn !! Nobel Prize, leaving us paralyzed, barely recognize, rising to right the wrongs to neutralize. Ooo look at those rhymes go… sewn with silver sinned dust,. Breathtakingly woven papi.. absolutely stunning.. the flow just pierces through the soul … the dreamy imagery is just perfect
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/7/2024 12:33:00 PM
Haha omg
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 7/7/2024 12:29:00 PM
Yea … midnight sun crying n laughing at the same time… dunno what mania this is … but the iPhone needs to go!!! XD
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Ink Empress
Date: 7/7/2024 12:27:00 PM
Oh no,, blocked are we *sent from my iphone” midnight sun cries hahah
Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 AM
This is a great topic to write on … but I can never write like you . So beautifully said.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/8/2024 7:40:00 PM
None of us can. Maybe Hiya

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