Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

What a Wondorous Garden

Who would have known,
that such beautiful flowers,
could grow from a place of darkness?
Yet these flowers sprouted out of your pain and suffering.

I walk breathlessly through your garden,
inhaling the heady aroma.
I listen to words spoken,
feeling the gentle touch tickle my ears.
When I see the color of your dreams, 
my heart celebrates your magnificence.
My rejuvinated spirit rises with your scent,
Still I am securely tethered by your roots.
You cradle me in delicate petals,
giving security to my soul.

I lay down upon your soil,
listening to your flowers whispering.
Your moisture,
soaks into my skin.
Your essence lives within my pores.
There is a rhythm,
for you are organic,
ever changing,
subtle and bold.
You are both serene and demanding!

I am constantly surprised,
as you transform before my eyes.
You are my oasis of softness.
You are my place of comfort and renewal.
The rebirth of my joy,
a safe haven beyond life's storms.
Yours is a magical Garden,
blooming in all seasons.

I will tend to your garden,
removing the weeds,
watering and nurturing your seeds.
Let me luxuriate in your soil,
for I long to be your source of light.
Let me filter through your atmosphere.
For should I live a million years
Not once would I ever wish,
to leave your garden.

Dedicated to my Sweetie

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis December 1, 2015 at 3:13 PM This is awesome tribute to the one you love. A gem glistening, a wonderful portrait to be framed. Richard, Thank you for stopping by with your warmth. Taunya Laya lives near Central Park West in New York, and travels around the world; doing group and individual sessions. See her site: MySecondbreath.com

Countess Arditezza December 1, 2015 at 8:34 AM Beautifully tended garden of words. It reminds me of Goethe's poem 'Found' where he does not seek to pluck the flower to keep it until it dies, but to tend it and let it grow. Gorgeous poem! Richard Lamoureux December 1, 2015 at 9:20 AM Thanks Countess!

Suzanne Delaney November 29, 2015 at 11:13 PM A magical love poem that equates the miracle of a garden to the miracle of love changing and growing. Excellent in every way. SuZ Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2015 at 11:24 PM Thanks again SuZ.

Susan Gentry November 26, 2015 at 9:15 PM I was taken in from the beginning. You completely captured the essence of love, and why one would nurture it, care for it, and never leave it. What a gift you have, both for poetry and your sweetie. Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2015 at 9:44 AM Thanks so much Susan.

Scott Thirtyseven November 24, 2015 at 7:41 AM Oooooh, now that's one beautiful dedication. Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thanks Scott.

Tim Ryerson November 24, 2015 at 4:57 AM Well my friend, I have to say that in my opinion, this is your best write to date...Every line and every verse is a true gem and although it is hard to choose, my FAVORITE line would have to be: 'When I see the color of your dreams'---WOW, so unique and original! Gotta go to my favs... Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thanks Tim, this is an older one that I rewrote.

Viv Wigley November 23, 2015 at 12:42 AM Love the imagery and style. You are obviously a lucky man, Richard. A great piece. Regards, Viv Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2015 at 8:29 AM I would agree Viv, thanks for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2015 at 4:03 PM wow, so loving and beautifully symbolic! Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2015 at 8:30 AM Thanks Andrea.

Duke Beaufort November 22, 2015 at 12:39 PM Such homage and such an allegory. You obviously have a great one to share your life with. A veritable garden of Eden! Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2015 at 2:04 PM I am indeed blessed my friend. Thanks for the visit.

Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 3:34 AM Such a beautiful write Richard your beautiful Mary is a lucky lady indeed:-)May your love continue to flourish for many many years:-) Hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:41 AM Thanks Jan, I feel I am the luck one.

Charmaine Chircop November 21, 2015 at 1:13 AM It seems like a magical garden . No wonder you feel the need to be there. So gentle and beautiful and full of love your words for such a lady.. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:43 AM Thanks Charmaine, I am so blessed.

Eileen Manassian November 20, 2015 at 10:52 PM The love breathes in every line of this poem of dedication, Richard. It's a wonderful write. The tenderness is palpable. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:47 AM Oh thanks Eileen, that was what I was hoping for. This is a rewrite of a piece I had written and upon rereading it it didn't fully capture my emotions.

Mama Bear November 20, 2015 at 8:46 PM You and Mary are such a wonderful couple Yes weeds do grow but your love takes care of the weeds and the flowers are magnificent Much love to both of you Mom Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:49 AM Thanks Mom, you have had the chance to get to know Mary so you know how fortunate I am. We love you too.

Arthur Vaso November 20, 2015 at 8:05 PM ahhhhh, thats so nice Richard, I know a garden of love when I see one! I am happy for both of you! Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:50 AM Thanks Arthur I appreciate that.

John Beam November 20, 2015 at 7:22 PM In light of the garden very great write Richard. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:51 AM Thanks John.;0).

Casarah Nance November 20, 2015 at 6:53 PM Ahh feels like I am walking in the footsteps I have walked before, and even more amazing is the feeling that it is comforting. I think this write is a treasure. I am happy you have someone that brings out the love in you, and I'm sure you do the same for her. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:53 AM Thanks Casarah, if you had not read the earlier version, this one would not have existed. I appreciate your visits.

Lin Lane November 20, 2015 at 6:46 PM awww Richard. I know your sweetie must love you...This is sentimental. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2015 at 8:53 AM Yes she does and I am better for it.