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What a Women Wants

Listen, without interupting A private space, small is ok Just a few minutes of me time. Hot passionate kisses, and plenty of them, yes keep 'em coming till I say when! Chocolate, just for me, buy you some too, Care for me, don't give up on me, forgive me. Love me inspite of my faults, eyes wide open Support with the kids, discipline and love the kids I won't give up on you, I love you inspite of your faults.

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Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 11/12/2009 10:26:00 AM

A lovely poem. I hope you recieve everything that you desire.

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/7/2009 11:34:00 AM

So that's what women want. And I thought Girls Just Want To Have Fun. To think I've been doing it wrong all these years. Great write Doris. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Marty Owens

Date: 11/2/2009 6:43:00 PM

Nice poem...too bad we men don't respect women's wishes a lot of the time...Enjoyed ...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/1/2009 8:44:00 PM

Great writing, Doris, enjoyed all the truths in your verses.. inspiring knowing we are not alone dealing with our men .... keep at it.. and thankxxx for commenting on my poetry today ... luv sharing with Soup poets... they are the best! Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2009 2:27:00 PM

"Care for me, don't give up on me" says sooo much, Doris. We all want to be loved unconditionally, especially when we offer unconditional love in return. Keep you chocolate! As you said, he can get some for himself. But more importantly, let those passionate kisses flow. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2009 5:24:00 AM

You've got that right but men don't totally understand sometimes and I guess we don't understand sometimes(Bang, Bang). Mom

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/30/2009 4:15:00 AM

Doris, You seem to have a way with words and insight. You have given some good advise to men in this lovely poem. I showed it to Ingrid, too. A sincere quit reply, "That's nice-". And I agree wholeheartedly. Lovingly, Dane

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/29/2009 8:55:00 PM

Nice, pretty much sums it up, Doris. Fun read this is for me. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.