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What a Grandmother Carries

She strains to find her footing in orthopedic shoes my grandmother's clop-clop walk to me unbalanced steadied by a backbone of faith She bears a tattered, red carpet bag, solid wooden handles, worn like her marbled hands Grandma removes jam tarts and her Bible (smell enticing) to tutor me for my Sunday School verses, Psalm 23, that welds to memory Her diligence that I adhere to the lines despite my craven pull to tarts (a riveting obsession) Unfussy delight when I learn the verses Her glow, free floating, a small harp ovation Grandmother's carpet bag, stitched by history brimming with the sweet lure of baking upheld by her faith, like a pulse that hums devotion in a drawn body softly folding into itself Nothing can be swept aside when a grandma voices validation when generosity extends itself when her walk thaws the ground when words embroider love ensuring preservation Poem revised: April 25, 2021

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Date: 5/5/2022 8:44:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this new win. So Beautiful. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..........
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/5/2022 9:42:00 AM
Greetings Paula, My appreciation for your thoughtful drop by + comment. I hope that you are well + enjoying spring. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 5/3/2022 8:20:00 PM
This, made me cry. I love it. I'm a grandma, may I live up to the stature of love that your grandmother presented. Thank you so much for this beautiful and heartfelt contribution to our contest, it is loved, it is faved! Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/3/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for the recognition in your contest. My grandmother was indeed a remarkably kind woman who devoted much of her life to her church + its charitable outreach. Sincere good wishes. Brian
Date: 12/5/2021 9:52:00 AM
Oh my....your last stanza, as Bly would have said, & many Spanish Poets..."rides on dragons" the last 3 "when" lines, trippin!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/5/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, James. I most appreciate your reads + comments on my postings. Be well. Brian
Date: 4/20/2021 7:09:00 AM
Very beautiful tribute of love and gratitude to and learned from grandma. Sincere congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/20/2021 11:14:00 AM
Hello Frances, Kind of you to comment on the tribute to my grandmother. She was a remarkable woman. Her death when I was 11 left a considerable void in my young life. Her love was constant + unconditional. Thank you again, Brian
Date: 3/18/2021 1:55:00 AM
What an endearing poem Brian.Grandmas are the best.I am sure she must be so proud of you.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/18/2021 7:51:00 AM
Your thoughtful remarks + drop by are encouraging. My re write is in the offing as the piece did not place well in the "I Remember" contest. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 3/17/2021 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Brian, on your win. Touching memories ~ Mala
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/17/2021 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, Mala. However, I have completed a re-write as a low placement had me questioning the word choice + images in my submission. Best wishes. Brian
Date: 3/16/2021 11:26:00 AM
WOW!!! What a beautiful write. Love your line, "when words embroider love." Have a blessed day....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/16/2021 1:49:00 PM
Hello Paula, Thank you very much for your kind words. My grandmother was devoted to her church + to helping others. She enjoyed tutoring me in my scripture memory work at Sunday school for which I won many ribbons. Now I plant tulips + hyacinths on my grandparents' grave. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 3/14/2021 10:59:00 AM
Ahhh!! What a nice memory of your grandmother. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/14/2021 6:48:00 PM
I appreciate your drop by, Sara. Your encouraging comments brighten March days. Sincere good wishes, Brian

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