Katherine Stella Poet Tanka

What a Beauty

<                                    beneath swollen ..... moon
                                      in pasture of...... rolling hills
                                      standing  ....hind quarters
                                      a beautiful black ...... stallion
                                      simply took my breath ........ away






Entry For
Rick Parise's 
A Memory Of Beauty
Tanka Contest
G.L. All

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Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2011 at 10:36 PM congratulations getting through round one with this wonderful tanka. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown March 9, 2011 at 3:50 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Katherine. Love Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 6:59 PM Congrats Katherine on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown January 13, 2011 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Katherine. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit January 10, 2011 at 6:22 PM If this tanka won for you in the contest, then congratulations! It is well written and pervasively descriptive. There's usually not much anyone can do with so few words and syllables, but you performed admirably with this one.

January 10, 2011 at 12:22 PM Creative style. Congratulations on having your poem featured my friend. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Rhia Madison Thomer January 9, 2011 at 8:22 PM and you served this memory of beauty well. best of luck to you and congratulations on being featured this week! --Madison

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 9, 2011 at 6:49 PM Congrats Katherine on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. H.N.Y..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 14, 2010 at 8:30 AM and this made me smile, Katherine, just picturing that beautiful black stallion-- must be breathtaking indeed -- congrats on your win -- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus September 1, 2010 at 1:40 PM Congratulations on your third place win!

Carrie Richards August 30, 2010 at 6:18 PM Ahh, this is such a painting in words!! Nicely done, Katherine! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire August 30, 2010 at 5:33 PM Katherine, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta August 30, 2010 at 5:14 PM Congrats on your third placement, Katherine.

James Fraser August 30, 2010 at 1:16 PM Many congratulations Katherine on your win in Rick's fine contest with this beautiful Tanka. Horses are such magnificent animals >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2010 at 4:42 AM Congratulations Katherine on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson August 29, 2010 at 8:21 PM Yes, Horses ae beautiful ceatures. congratulatios. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2010 at 7:22 PM ps oh, and congratulations!!

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2010 at 7:21 PM I take it you are a horse lover, And your tanka is also a thing of beauty. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels August 29, 2010 at 6:37 PM Katherine, congratulations on your win in Rick's Tanka contest :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 29, 2010 at 6:36 PM Congrats Katherine on your big win in Rick's Tanka contest.. awesome as usual.. enjoy my friend..with luv..

Wilma Neels August 27, 2010 at 4:47 AM A beautiful entry for Rick's contest Katherine, all the best to you ~ Wilma

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2010 at 11:08 PM a wonderful poem , enjoyed,..p.d.

James Marshall Goff August 26, 2010 at 11:19 AM yes! wonderful image, Katherine! good work! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 26, 2010 at 8:41 AM My favorite horse.. a stallion which I also wrote a poem called Stallion for a contest which wad on soup and it won third.. they are a brilliant beautiful animal and your Tanka has enriched this lovely creation Katherine.. good luck in the contest... am airborne now so be cool my friend..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 26, 2010 at 7:40 AM Oh, seeing that stallion would take my breath away too, Katherine. A lovely image. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

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