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What - Senryu

WHAT??? - Senryu devilish smiles candy wrapper evidence crinkling in pockets John G. Lawless ©11/1/2018

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/2/2018 6:39:00 PM
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heehee That was me as a child (and even as an adult sometimes)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2018 10:32:00 AM
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Andrea, every so often my granddaughter hears that crinkle and her eyes light up as she whispers.....Papa....
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 11/1/2018 11:11:00 PM
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beautiful senryu
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John Lawless
Date: 11/2/2018 2:31:00 PM
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thank you Mahtab.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 3:23:00 PM
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That was cool John. I really liked this one.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/2/2018 2:31:00 PM
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Yeah, we parents have to suppress our glee at having total access to ALL the candy......heheheee

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