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from an in-ground spring to open arms the north sea… joyous the river © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Date: 3/28/2021 10:21:00 PM
lovely ~
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Date: 2/26/2021 9:07:00 AM
A well written Haiku Harry
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:46:00 AM
Such grand imagery and versatile verse. Panagiota
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:51:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku great imagery and feelings. Just perfect. God bless! Take care, Rama
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:28:00 AM
Such a cute haiku... enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing..
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Date: 2/17/2021 4:29:00 AM
Great haiku Harry
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:52:00 AM
I want to splash in it Harry, you make it sound so inviting. Barefoot in the sun laughing and running, into a river of love and joy. Thanks for the lines, and the imagined moment. Have a blessed day.
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Date: 2/16/2021 2:58:00 PM
Hi Harry, This is just lovely. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 2/16/2021 1:32:00 PM
just beautiful, Harry.
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:04:00 AM
Harry, this is a beautifully crafted haiku. I love the part: “to open arms the North Sea”......the imagery is perfection!
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Date: 2/16/2021 4:55:00 AM
This is so lovely Harry. I got a mental image of that b eautiful riveer flowing into the sea. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/15/2021 3:08:00 PM
A well written Haiku, Harry. I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 12:14:00 PM
A true haiku that creates a beautiful image of the spring joining the river, Harry. I wonder if you're writing of a spot in Australia. A poem for my faves! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:28:00 AM
Reading this fine write reminded me of the lyrics to the song "Unchained Melody".
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:43:00 AM
Excellently done. ~~
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Date: 2/15/2021 6:40:00 AM
This poem brings joy for sure and welcoming to envision :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 6:33:00 AM
Your ending line says it all--why the river rushes into open arms.
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:08:00 AM
- Excellent haiku, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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