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Wet Moon

Sagan grins from a Pale Blue Dot
As LCROSS finds water in Cabeus.
Is Su Shih's bright moon finally told --
Echoed by Dickinson's moon of gold?

Did Armstrong sit in contemplation
O'er cheesy man-in-the-moon inspiration
By Yeats, Coleridge, Thomas (Dylan) and Shelley;
Li Po, Longfellow, Whitman and Lindsay?

Under Moore's young moon of May we're planting
Bamboo groves in moonbeams slanting.
Moonrise to moonset, across dead rivers --
Elvis and Emily share moon-rock shivers.

To Sandburg's moon of harvest silver,
Wells used Cavorite (but just a sliver).
Now, listen as the Selonites motion --
Whispering of Earth and its teeming blue ocean.

While I, wild moon-child, begin to spool
By the light of Merritt's Lovecraftian Pool:
"Moon-water shall be the death of me
This year."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 2:56 PM
I agree Tom Quigley's comment here. It's a fascinating write , this one of yours i have stumbled on in your Best poetry list. Very interesting how you discussed the moon in so many situations, Tom. Well done.
Arnone Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Thought you read this one already. :-)
Quigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Fascinating write! Loved it.
Arnone Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Tom, Tom! ;-)
Day Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Nicely written! Congrats on your 8th place win in the Your Best contest! Jesse
Arnone Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Jesse.
Haight Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Such a powerful write, Tom. Congratulations on your placement in this Premiere Contest! 7 Sandra
Arnone Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Yes, Sandra. Thank you very much. :-)
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Tom, brilliant write, thanks for the support. I have a part time blog, if you wanna stop by. Skat
Arnone Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 11:07 PM
I'll do that. And, thanks again! :-)
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:29 PM
What a deep and powerful poem, it calls me to read more than once, to take it all in !! Hooray for you, Tom !
Arnone Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thanks, Carrie. :-)
Bateman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Hello Tom, This is a quite intriguing write. Very Unique. I really like the imagery, the irony, the word play, and the cumulative poetic power of your poem. Most Excellent Work!! A Seven + FAV for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
Arnone Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, Gary. Positive feedback is like rocket fuel. :-)
A   Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 12:07 PM
so much wonder here. Tom, a brilliant poem, very poetic. LINDA
Arnone Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Yea, I like this one, too.... ;-)
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