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Wet Cheeks

Farewell imminent My thoughts now tempt loneliness I can feel wet cheeks

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 6:10:00 AM

Marvelously amazing poem. (: Simplicity is nicely made in this. -JWE Ps: so sad, but cool!

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/28/2018 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, JW!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/24/2018 7:29:00 AM

Lovely, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/24/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Line Happy Thursday xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2018 6:49:00 PM

aww a tearjerker in many ways Mike:-( hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/23/2018 6:52:00 PM

We need our tears for sure xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2018 4:38:00 PM

Sad but to the point..message well delivered.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/23/2018 6:35:00 PM

Thank you Vijay!!

Warren Doll

Date: 5/23/2018 3:04:00 PM

Wonderful! You are able to let the reader know about tears, but not use the word. Your line "I can feel wet cheeks" is brilliant. Well done, Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/23/2018 3:49:00 PM

Thank so much Warren for your way to kind comment! Thanks was very nice of you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/23/2018 12:12:00 PM

A Senryu with powerful feeling. Well done Mike :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/23/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thanks so much, Heidi xxoo

Silent One

Date: 5/23/2018 10:32:00 AM

Awwww need a tissue? Sad senryu my friend..

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/23/2018 10:38:00 AM

Sure, send it over !!!