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Welcome Winter Jq

Fall breeze, a soothing goodbye
kiss on amber leaves filled sky.
Entrancing they fall, descend
round and round last final bend. 


Goodbye, fall, welcome winter
sky. Sun grimace at bitter
descend for longer night hold,
bend to the grim winter cold.

3/8/2019


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Joanna Daniel Date: 3/12/2019 3:21:00 AM An inspiring poem, Eve:) sure to be a winner:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/10/2019 12:50:00 PM I am reading what you wrote Dear Heart. What an incredibly hard winter it has been for many people. This poem sure gets that point across! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/10/2019 11:19:00 AM Eve, great poem , I am so ready for Spring here in Canada, today it is snowing again all day, sigh! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/10/2019 12:12:00 PM Thank you, Dear Heart. The weather has made a change here the past week, from 36 to 80 it is incredible. :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Judy Ball Date: 3/9/2019 2:25:00 PM Love this Eve. Here in Alberta the Winter is long and has been very cold. We are ready for Spring. Great job here. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/10/2019 12:13:00 PM Thank you, Judy, for your encouragement :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/9/2019 12:16:00 AM Ah, Eve, your imagery is lovely and your metaphors so sagely wise. "Sun grimace at bitter decend for longer night hold." Wow! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 3/10/2019 12:14:00 PM Thank you, Caren, for your constant inspiration and encouragement :) .. Hugs Eve ~`*