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Declared an outcast, shunned by society - but she's the same as you and me, but You can't see her pain hidden behind her coy smile. You can't wipe away those tears, invisible to your shallow eyes. In fear she stares at the pavement, but she can see you stare. She can hear your giggles. She can feel your judgement. Her crime? Only that she is different. Freak is not her name, but you shout it, roaring like a lion. To you she looks peculiar and you wonder why she behaves strange. Her monotone words are a result of your ignorant mind that has lead to her indulging in esoteric tendencies. She may seem socially awkward, but she means no harm. She just wants to belong - for one soul to understand. There is no eye contact, because living can hurt. Misplaced in an oblivious world, the skies may look bright to you and me, but all she recognises is the darkness. The soul is deep like an ocean, but most only see the surface. Only a few dare to venture to the bottom - where most drown. Only the strong reemerge. The Silent One Simple Musings 24 October 2017

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Date: 1/25/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hello Silent One, I feel so sorry for this woman in your poem. I feel badly she was put down just being the way she is{herself{ She can only be herself and no one else. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/21/2019 11:33:00 PM
This is very deep and meaningful. I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 3/20/2018 10:14:00 AM
"There is no eye contact, because living can hurt." - best line! I also appreciate "the skies may look bright to you and me, but all she recognises is the darkness" Because I can relate to it on different phases of my life. You get used to the dark when you're in it so long. Last stanza is amazing! Great one. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/12/2018 2:58:00 PM
Strong message. Greatness
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Date: 12/14/2017 5:40:00 AM
Once upon a time I was that weirdo, not a freak just the fragile girl shy but wants to fit in. Only to be bullied! Not anymore for sure. I am stronger than their mean souls... Lol!
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Date: 11/3/2017 6:07:00 PM
Powerful and insightful poem SO, really depicts the harsh reality especially for some of the marginalized youth today!
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Date: 10/30/2017 11:59:00 PM
A very special poem. I love the whole but the last stanza is outstanding.
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:08:00 AM
OH!So touching she is harmless this weirdo but people just don't understand her
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Date: 10/28/2017 10:59:00 AM
A strong, powerful and a true poem, Silent One, the desire to belong drives some people to do bizarre things..and most often we don't see beyond the bizarre to what they truly are inside...
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:34:00 PM
Such a moving read SO. The essence of time...and empathy and the fast street lane has left us out of reach. Very emotional write. Exceptionally well delivered. Left me thinking...this is the world we live in. How many would actually have the courage and strength to help out? The world has become isolated. People chose to mind their peace. The lions bearing weapons? Who knows. My heart goes out for this soul. Emotional read. You are the best!
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:16:00 PM
Good write Silent One. So well described and emotional. :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 10/27/2017 6:33:00 AM
We are used to look superficially ... Our attitude is abysmally upsetting the others you have so powerfully penned about ... Great ...
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:34:00 AM
That is true my friend.. Thank you for your comment..
Date: 10/27/2017 1:35:00 AM
This definitely reminds me of Aspbergers syndrome. Super intelligent yet socially inept to communicate well with others. Very well done SO. I have had personal friends with this and it is difficult for them. Unless they get quite inebriated.
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:35:00 AM
A few people have said that.. It was more in regards to a goth character, who has become dark, due to judgement and trauma.. Thank you for your comment Kelli..
Date: 10/26/2017 11:14:00 AM
..but most only see the surface..i am cut ! I am gonna add this to my fav ....took my heart away !!!
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:36:00 AM
Too many people do that Red, thank you for your comments and FAV..
Date: 10/26/2017 2:54:00 AM
Excellent. An emotional and empathetic write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Ravi..
Date: 10/26/2017 1:34:00 AM
This is so good. Excellent and insightful, Kai
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Kai..
Date: 10/25/2017 9:26:00 PM
Radiohead's Creep!!! Such a very fitting choice for your amazing poem SO! Love this cover AND your writing!! I'm compelled to take this girl into my arms and tell her the best way to ever be ... is different !!
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Judith, I am sure that is exactly what she wants.. To be accepted and loved..
Date: 10/25/2017 3:27:00 PM
Once again, S-1, your free verse is beautiful and impactful...the topic handled with considerate understanding. Who are we to judge others....though very often we fall into the trap of doing so!! Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:46:00 AM
Yes, we all do.. Thank you Paul..
Date: 10/25/2017 1:43:00 PM
That is a very good poem
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Christina..
Date: 10/25/2017 12:22:00 PM
Love, Love, Love This!!
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Vickie..
Date: 10/25/2017 10:03:00 AM
So true and everyone has their own beauty! We are all children of God.. Thank you for posting!
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Silent One
Date: 10/26/2017 6:48:00 AM
Indeed we are ... Thank you Donna..
Date: 10/25/2017 9:34:00 AM
She needs help, maybe friend?
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:38:00 AM
Yes Alfred..
Date: 10/25/2017 8:53:00 AM
Well said! Everyone has a story to tell. This would be a good companion piece with my "Broken People" poem.
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:41:00 AM
I remember that poem Richard.. Was a great poem.. Thanks
Date: 10/24/2017 10:24:00 PM
An emotional and empathetic write Silent One, very strongly voicing the harsh reality of publicly judging,shunning and shaming of another individual. You have so poetically raised awareness on the cruel topic of bullying. Your last stanza is exceptional and insightful...Well done!
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Silent One
Date: 10/27/2017 6:39:00 AM
Yeah I loved it, especially the scene that she set and her emotive appearance..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/25/2017 9:08:00 PM
Wow! Emily does such an artistic, emotional and captivating rendition of one of my favorite songs... her voice is eerily beautiful and her performance fits the theme of your poem perfectly. A great video and song to accompany your awesome write.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/25/2017 9:01:00 AM
No, I haven't yet bc of time constraints but I will later this evening...
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Silent One
Date: 10/25/2017 5:46:00 AM
Hope you had a chance to listen to the song and watch the video..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/25/2017 5:33:00 AM
Agreed and your pic is a perfect illustration of this subject btw...
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Silent One
Date: 10/25/2017 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I hope it open the eyes to those who like to discriminate against those who may not be the same as them..
Date: 10/24/2017 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful soul she is indeed...
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Silent One
Date: 10/25/2017 5:25:00 AM
Yes, thank you..
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