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Weeping

Heavy and dark eyes yearning in a broken heart inspires the silence

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Vicki Acquah

Date: 10/18/2014 5:41:00 AM

brevity well done.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 7:02:00 AM

it was a pleasure in reading thank you for the beautiful comment vicki deeply appreciated

Vicki Acquah
Date: 10/18/2014 5:46:00 AM

liam mcdaid thank you for stopping by and leaving the encouraging comment on my poem."Through Different Eyes"

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2014 3:30:00 PM

Many a time tears fall in silence; the bitter sound of a broken heart gets lost in the depth within. I love this senryu, Liam...a top rating for it! // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 4:13:00 PM

thank you paul for the wonderful comment so very true i drew it right to the soul behind the mirrors so to speak wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/17/2014 1:09:00 AM

I really like your last line. The word inspire is typically an uplifting word, but you used it with silence and changed the tone of it completely. You've poignantly described that the real tragedy is the lack of feeling anything (whether sorrow or happiness). Nicely done!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 2:27:00 AM

so very true timothy loss of love is always a tragedy truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/16/2014 3:05:00 AM

It brings Shakespeare to mind when he says that silence is love's death! Superb my friend , Liam. A seven for beauty and content!

Vicki Acquah
Date: 10/18/2014 5:42:00 AM

love the fast punch of the poem -then out. you taught me to appreciate this form.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 3:40:00 AM

to be or not to be silence is the cold death of beauty this i say demetrios heartfelt wonderful comment truly over the moon pal deeply appreciated

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/15/2014 11:32:00 PM

A very captivating and poignant read. Well done my friend!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 3:34:00 AM

thank you suzanne dazzling beautiful comment deeply appreciated heartfelt

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/15/2014 8:03:00 PM

Very deep Senryu , Liam! :) Love & Light! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 8:16:00 PM

thank you for the beautiful light dorian bless you dear friend

Tim Smith

Date: 10/15/2014 6:16:00 PM

Wonderful liam....The worlds events does break your heart...cheers

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 6:20:00 PM

smiling events excellent comment tim thank you kindly pal deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2014 3:30:00 PM

I like how you said, "inspires the silence." that is very interesting!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 4:05:00 PM

love is the teardrop split with pain smiling wonderful comment your picking my brain lol always a great pleasure andrea thank you kindly

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/15/2014 3:20:00 PM

The silence of yearning...lovely. BG

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 3:59:00 PM

its the cross over into sadness of love one weeps smiling beautiful comment barbara

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 2:54:00 PM

You give me lots to think about Liam. I picture you sitting there and wonder what you are thinking.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 3:55:00 PM

in all of everything bad in the world today god be merciful for small mercies my mum used to say so much heartache weeping i might do smiling next brenda bless you for the wonderful comment