Wedding Night

What started with a gaze, Transformed to nuptial bliss. You took my breath away, Within our first kiss. · Feeling your soft tanned skin, Brushing next to mine. Steams the windows of my soul, Sending shivers up my spine. · Tonight is our night, We finally are complete. Our poetic hearts are scribing, Midnight sonnets with each beat. · You’ve waited for this moment, Now I’m finally yours. I’ll love you ‘til my soul, Sets sail for Heaven’s shores. · You’re the one and only, Who brings joy to my life. We are sensual lovers, Husband and wife. ________________ *Note: Just a poem
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Scoville Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 9:46 PM
Great write and a lovely read...The Southern Belle
Culverhouse Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 6:33 PM
Just a romantic poem!! enjoyed reading!!
Martin Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 1:02 PM
A great story of love.
Neal Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 12:55 PM
I wish I wrote this, this is a great example of your creativity and talent, great job. DN
Neal Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 12:49 PM
I can imaging your words as a clear picture in my mind. Very romantic. Love E
Goombi Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Amazing and sensual. Nice job.. CG
Sweetheart Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem on the Soup, Raul... great look into the intimate moments of love and romance ... great write as always... blessings ... luv..Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Pickett Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Very intimate friend... I like the love poem, you do well with this topic.. Well done sir.....:JP]
Segal Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Beautifully romantic! lovely poem, love Simone
Strand Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 12:28 AM
A romantic Raul today,have a good weekend.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Sheart Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 8:01 PM
A beautiful romantic poem Raul. You should be writing Hallmark cards, smile. Here's wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving and Christmas Season. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
George   Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 7:15 PM
Will - I would say this poem is just waiting for the right lady. Beautiful Quatrain, Raul. Lainie
Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Any married couples or even newly weds would be delighted if this was written for them, it's a beautiful poem Raul >> James
Richards Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Romantic, and perfect poem for any newly married couple. Lovely! ~ Carrie
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 11:12 PM
Oki Raul:)Just a poem:)Raul is not getting married!!..No Wedding Cards,Congratulations and Mourning Cards:)Oki ,You re not getting married!It was all about that first Kiss..:)very Romantic,and Steamy.Sensual lovers-Your poetic hearts scribing--love this verse,this is most important in marriage or in any commitement i guess,to be lovers..to bring joy, to your loved ones ,to be happy..Lovely poem sprinkled with spices of a happy life...lucky couple--Charma
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