Weaving Forms- a Parody

Weaving Forms

Abc, Abecedarian, acrostic, alliteration alexandrine
  Salaam, sehraa senyru, sestina, sijo, shape, sonnet
      The list of forms of writing poesy is hopelessly endless
           O angels of all these poetic forms I worship thee blindly!
               When didst thou all give an audience to man to school him 
                    On these plethora of poetic forms to befuddle the muddlehead?
                          Never had I heard such scary terms before joining Poetry Soup
                      Life and poetry were much easier with no tensions no insomnia
                   Simply pouring out my uncontrollable thoughts and emotions 
              I cringe when I read of restrictions of limited lines in poetic forms
          My ice-creams don't melt, autumn strolls have to to be cut short
      Get mad as a hornet whether to write señorita a sonnet or sonetto
    Nayda, I enjoy weaving my prosaic didactic and euphoric thoughts   
Into my qasida with alliterations, imageries, allusions humorously



(FIRST
October 29, 2015
Contest: Which Is Your Favourite Form Of Poetry?
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron)

*This poem is a satiric amalgamation of many forms-sonnet, qasida, acrostic (in parts-eg, line 1&2, 3-5, 6&7-for the purpose of parody), humour....
*Qasida (weaving) is a satirical Persian form, opens with a short prelude, the nasib,    which is elegiac in mood and is intended to gain the audience’s involvement
* in this parody I have used the alliteration in the first two lines as a 'nasib'
* In the last line the pun is used for weaving 
*Have given 'Shape' or 'Creative Outlay' to the poem
*Have made use of many literary devices-alliteration, allusions, imageries, metaphors....

FIRST
Judged on April 5, 2016
For Casarah Nance's Favourite Poetry

June 19, 2016
For Laura Loo
First Place Only-2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/6/2016 11:10:00 AM
A great congratulation my lovely friend, bl
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/6/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Devnath!
Date: 5/6/2016 10:40:00 AM
I love the way you've designed your plot, like the tail of an arrow! Congrats Balveen, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/6/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Teddy! What a beautiful similie!
Date: 5/6/2016 7:06:00 AM
Congrats Balveen to win first place. Excellent job. Hugs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/6/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 5/5/2016 6:15:00 AM
An intricate knit... Congratulations on your win!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 5/4/2016 11:24:00 PM
My gosh, this is awesome! A lot of thought and art in this. Congratulations on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation Susan!
Date: 5/4/2016 9:46:00 PM
Hi Balveen, Wow, what a feast of words and poetic devices, very impressive. Congrats on your win! Cheers, Brian
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Brian!
Date: 5/4/2016 9:05:00 PM
I can tell the work it must have took to get this write, it blends both the forms and the functions of the website that makes it relatable to everyone here. Very well done, thank you for entering this one, I enjoyed reading it.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation, Casarah & Glad you enjoyed the read!
Date: 11/2/2015 10:05:00 PM
Congrats on first place, Balveen. I tend to agree with you regarding the overwhelming amount of poetry forms and even the tight restrictions on some of the poetry contests. Love your tongue-in-cheek approach. A fun read. Need to read it several times to catch everything. :) Janece
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:48:00 AM
Janece, I'm bowled over by your praises ! Thanks dear! Balveen
Date: 11/2/2015 5:40:00 PM
Heartiest Congrats to win the First place AnishaD
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 11/2/2015 1:34:00 PM
Interesting... creative... Congratulations!!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/5/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 11/2/2015 12:55:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/2/2015 12:49:00 PM
Such a wonderful creative entry, Balveen. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thanks for your admiration, dear Sandra! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/2/2015 11:44:00 AM
Balveen, awesome win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 1:06:00 PM
Many thanks Skat! Balveen
Date: 11/2/2015 11:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Well deserved and great job :) -LU
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Laura! Balveen
Date: 11/2/2015 10:05:00 AM
a buffet of poetry forms... congrats on your award,balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Nette! A buffet? Well, I really accept that as a compliment!
Date: 11/2/2015 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations in your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Nayda for accepting this parody! This is one poem whose result I was real curious to know!
Date: 10/29/2015 11:28:00 AM
Love your humour here Balveen - I have learned so many new forms I had never heard of before - but my preferred style is rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest:-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
Jan, I learnt all this after joining Poetry Soup! So I wrote a parody on all of it! Yes, I do need luck-I've de tracked, as usual! Perhaps, my forte is detracking! Love, Balveen
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