Weave

the tempered veil of years with a weave of sweet and sour
can be lavish like the pleasurable return of good deeds
take what you learn from sky high places
                                    that bleed clouds to the hills

weave towards green with its hypnotic continuity
reach for the weightlessness of a dandelion seed
                        in a breeze of somersaults 

weave away if lies spoken with zest 
                                                become believable 
seek a safe place from huff and puff winds
             woven into refuge like design in a quilt
find what's essential like peek-a-boo games
                                     that tickle a child to glee

work strains
whittles at days
the hourglass sighs at what sags away

summer still holds the chatter of birds
young buds still weave upward
                      ungloving hands holding chains and fear
joy still roams to signboards above
nothing desolate
a sanctuary
Elysium 
        in walls that rise
        in stars unnamed

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Date: 8/23/2023 6:48:00 AM
Yes, I agree, Brian. So much in life is free and we take it for granted. Thanks for sharing this one and reminding us of what we have in life that is free. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/23/2023 7:38:00 AM
Greetings Sara, Thanks very much for your visit + for the affirmative take on my poem. I hope that you are well. Sincerest regards always, Brian
Date: 8/18/2023 3:35:00 AM
Another wonderful tapestry of words and images that, together, make such pleasing reading. It's what I have come to expect from a Brian Sambourne poem. Great work! Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/18/2023 7:03:00 AM
Hi Gary, I hope all is well with you. Constance has given us free range in selecting word as the base for our poem. That open invitation works well with me. Thank you for your stop by and supportive words. Regards always, Brian
Date: 8/18/2023 2:13:00 AM
Another excellent winner; congratulations
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/18/2023 7:01:00 AM
Greetings Terry, Thanks very much for the congratulatory message. Be well. Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 12:01:00 PM
- Excellent vocabulary, Brian :) - Congratulations on your well-deserved top win :) - hugs
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2023 1:47:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise, for your visit + congratulatory message. I hope your summer goes well. Cheers, Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 10:06:00 AM
Lovely poetry Brian, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2023 1:48:00 PM
Kind of you to stop by + give my small piece a supportive comment. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this marvellous poem. Outstanding images and choice of words!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2023 9:32:00 AM
Very thoughtful of you to see value in my submission. Thank you, Malabika. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 7:21:00 AM
"joy still roams to signboards above nothing desolate a sanctuary Elysium" - Great work. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2023 7:39:00 AM
My appreciation for your stop by + appraisal of my poem. Thank you for the congratulatory note. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 5:57:00 AM
Brian, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2023 6:02:00 AM
Most thoughtful of you to appraise my poem so highly. If only my work could meet your praise. I hope life is bountiful for you Lasaad. All the best, Brian
Date: 8/16/2023 4:49:00 AM
Wonderful. Congrats on your top win, God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/16/2023 5:52:00 AM
Greetings Gina, I hope that you are well. Thank you kindly for your congratulatory wishes. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 8/15/2023 10:12:00 AM
Great imagery as usual, Brian. I hope you enter this one in a contest. Well-written, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:16:00 AM
Many thanks, Bill, for your vote of confidence in my posting. I hope all is well with you. Best wishes, Brian
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