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Weather Forecast 2018

Less hazy fog in my brain
and condensation on my eye frames
more dew for my dry eyes
and less salty floods for when I cry
more rain for my parched mouth
and less humidity on my leather couch
less ice between heart beats
and less long winds for when I speak
more warmth for my cold hands
and less dust devils on my ceiling fans
less funnel cakes landing on my plate
more popcorn showers in their wake
less frostbite on my nose
while thawing out my ten frozen toes
more lightning bugs to help me see
and less thunder bolts that make me flee
less snow drifts that are sky high
more rainbows that make me sigh
less clouds in my family tree
and more sunshine for you and me.


1-1-2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2018 12:33:00 AM

Belated congrats on this fun take on the weather challenge contest, Cheryl.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/3/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/31/2018 4:23:00 PM

Hi Cheryl, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Alexis; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/31/2018 12:06:00 PM

lets hope for long periods of sunshine in our lives and no dull grey teary days. Congrats on your win Che:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 7:39:00 PM

Yes, definitely lets hope for more sunshine;…Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Jan; Appreciate it!~hugs Che xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/31/2018 7:56:00 AM

A well thought out piece of poetry Cheryl. Congrats on your win Regards Tom.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:29:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/31/2018 12:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Cheryl, I loved this piece and your optimistic outlook. Viv x

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:28:00 AM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the third place winners and kind congrats Viv; I enjoyed writing this for the contest…Appreciate it Viv!~Che :)