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Wearing Slippers On the Ice

Decked out and wearing slippers
Driveway ten miles high or so it seems
Icy and unrelenting
Why does my David think
we can make it through the moss?
We climb the cliffs or so it seems

Two sons, well a son and his friend,
see me almost meet my end
They’ve been staring out the pane
Are they teens at all?

I slip as if drunk ~
a winterwork’s wipeout

‘Fore I can blink
I’ve been set upright
betwixt the stately oaks,
carried into the comforting arms
of home

Sons are born, some come as a friend —
together they save a mother
from death’s humiliation and shudder

I think my David made it inside
He must have ‘cause he is by my side

The next uproar is our hearty laugh
as our car sits lonely at the bottom
awaiting tomorrow’s thaw

Things look prettier
behind the pane

and once again these young men
morph into teens
hiding in their cave

Like fairies at midnight,
no one believes they exist
to save you, reset your timeline

Boys grow up to be men
sometimes it shows
‘fore their time

and love grows for two sons -
one will stay,
the other’s the equivalent 
of one snowflake ~
worth a dendritic cent,
a collectible

10/26/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/29/2020 4:18:00 AM
How marvelous! So wonderful that they rushed out there! I imagine you felt instant relief, and will never forget realizing how much they care.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 5:34:00 AM
Truly!
Date: 10/26/2020 11:45:00 AM
A chilliy experience Kim, but your knights saved you. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 7:45:00 PM
Yes, they did! :)
Date: 10/26/2020 9:27:00 AM
Boys and men help. Careful how to walk on ice. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 9:51:00 AM
So bad in our steep yard!
Date: 10/26/2020 6:02:00 AM
This is a sweet poem about sons, near-sons, friends, and men Kim. I really enjoyed the read (and I hope you weren't hurt!).hugs {} Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2020 6:12:00 AM
Just stunned. That door flew open before you could blink! There is the sweetness of boys and men! Thank you, Linda!

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