Weakness

Weakness Comes in many forms Physical mental when born Some happen as we grow Accidents happen as we know People change grow sad Others change go mad Some are left with empty hearts The complication of growing old Weakness takes its toll We should if you can lend a hand We the strong should carry the load Why because it is God that loves all

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/5/2017 5:25:00 PM

Weakness does take a toll,We are strong should carry the load. Yes God does love us all.I have enjoyed this poem. Hugs,Darlene from Canada.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2017 8:26:00 PM

You are so right my friend Hugs....

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/5/2017 5:52:00 PM

Hi Darlene , I am happy you enjoyed , God is always watching , action speaks louder than words :)))) hugs

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/5/2017 5:20:00 PM

This is a sweet poem, Niall. We should all have compassion for each other and try to help each other make it through life. You have a good heart. Hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/5/2017 5:49:00 PM

Hi Becca , I like helping others always did I would not have it any other way, glad you liked :)))))hugs