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About any girl walking by Can pop rivets off a man's fly So what can we do But make eyes at you And hope your response is thigh high?* *Inspired by an elderly woman basking on Kuhio Beach with "Hi!" tattoos on both upper inner thighs. What's next? "Welcome!" beach towels?

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Date: 10/16/2021 2:30:00 PM
at least her tatoo's are still readable. I have a friend who had a butter fly on her butt when she was young and with weight gain and age it now looks like a dead moth.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/17/2021 11:03:00 AM
My flying eagle tattoo now looks like it was gut-shot; time always offers a different perspective .. . . . Aloha!
Date: 10/16/2021 7:10:00 AM
That old woman should be ashamed! LOL! GOOD one, Rico. Janice
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/16/2021 11:12:00 AM
Why? People are still looking at her!
Date: 10/15/2021 11:50:00 PM
Can't think of an adequate lei pun at the moment, maybe you can help?
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/16/2021 11:11:00 AM
Try me on for sighs?
Date: 10/15/2021 8:06:00 PM
my son always tells me there is nothing wrong .... but mom sees the human body a beautiful canvas
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/16/2021 11:11:00 AM
Americans, from coast to coast, support advertisements! Hi! at 69 may be perceived as a plea rather than an invitation . . . .
Date: 10/15/2021 11:27:00 AM
Cleverly naughty. lol
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/15/2021 12:07:00 PM
I could instantly tell she was not Italian-American as her tattoos would possibly be, "Ciao down!"

Book: Shattered Sighs