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WE WILL REMEMEBER THEM

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07~15~15 was n/a in a contest but went on to be
Published by Prolific Press -in Issue 33 of three line poetry

war graves surround me stretching into the distance scarlet poppies grow* eleven o’clock on remembrance Sunday cannon volley heard all birdsong ceases we bow our heads in silence respecting war dead red against the black I wear my poppy with pride in remembrance 11/11/23

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Karen Croft

Date: 3/1/2024 5:27:00 AM

Beautiful tribute!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/15/2023 6:58:00 PM

nicely done, Jan!

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/12/2023 12:22:00 PM

A stunning tribute dear Jan. So poignant. So touching and reflective. The last verse, in particular, really has an impact,’ red against black’. Hugs to you for a wonderful, respectful poem. Xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Christina, I am so glad I re posted my poem from 2015 with a few poignant lines to go with it-) hugs jan xx

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/12/2023 7:03:00 AM

A moving tribute Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 12:30:00 PM

thanks so much TS:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 9:48:00 PM

Bless you, Jan, for writing of those we honor on this day each year. A fine poem to honor them with. A U.S.A. Air Force veteran, Bill

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Bill, it is a day we must never forget:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 11/11/2023 4:10:00 PM

A fine remembrance day write, Jan. Glad your n/a poem found approval elsewhere. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:12:00 AM

thanks Terry yes you can imagine how delighted I was when it was published:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/11/2023 3:43:00 PM

...and yet we only give them one day a year. Wonderful tribute Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:12:00 AM

so true DT thanks for dropping by hope things are picking up for you now, you have been missed:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/11/2023 2:16:00 PM

Jan, love it, a great Veteran's Day poem, the fallen should be honored and recognized.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:10:00 AM

thanks Tania xxhugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 11/11/2023 10:57:00 AM

They gave their lives for us. Great lines of remembrance, Jan. How could anyone n/a that?

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:10:00 AM

yeah the irony of being n/a then for it to be published :-) hugs Jan xx

Tony Hargreaves

Date: 11/11/2023 10:39:00 AM

Hi Jan. We will remember them at our remembrance serivice at eleven tomorrow. Thousands of young ones sent as lambs to the slaughter. Shocking. But its happening now. When will we ever learn? Hope you are well. Best wishes. Tony X

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 6:09:00 AM

thanks Tony, the ravages of war are still raging on as you say lambs to the slaughter but there are so many innocent victims caught up in these atrocities:-( hugs Jan xx

WE WILL REMEMEBER THEM

Poem in bold written on 07~15~15 was n/a in a contest but went on to be Published by Prolific Press -in Issue 33 of three line poetry

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07~15~15 was n/a in a contest but went on to be
Published by Prolific Press -in Issue 33 of three line poetry