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07~15~15 was n/a in a contest but went on to be 
Published by Prolific Press -in Issue 33 of three line poetry 

 

WE WILL REMEMEBER THEM


war graves surround me stretching into the distance scarlet poppies grow*
eleven o’clock on remembrance Sunday cannon volley heard all birdsong ceases we bow our heads in silence respecting war dead red against the black I wear my poppy with pride in remembrance 11/11/23
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Date: 3/1/2024 5:27:00 AM
Beautiful tribute!
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Date: 11/15/2023 6:58:00 PM
nicely done, Jan!
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:22:00 PM
A stunning tribute dear Jan. So poignant. So touching and reflective. The last verse, in particular, really has an impact,’ red against black’. Hugs to you for a wonderful, respectful poem. Xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Christina, I am so glad I re posted my poem from 2015 with a few poignant lines to go with it-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2023 7:03:00 AM
A moving tribute Jan
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:30:00 PM
thanks so much TS:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 9:48:00 PM
Bless you, Jan, for writing of those we honor on this day each year. A fine poem to honor them with. A U.S.A. Air Force veteran, Bill
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thanks Bill, it is a day we must never forget:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 4:10:00 PM
A fine remembrance day write, Jan. Glad your n/a poem found approval elsewhere. Terry
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:12:00 AM
thanks Terry yes you can imagine how delighted I was when it was published:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 3:43:00 PM
...and yet we only give them one day a year. Wonderful tribute Jan.
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:12:00 AM
so true DT thanks for dropping by hope things are picking up for you now, you have been missed:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 2:16:00 PM
Jan, love it, a great Veteran's Day poem, the fallen should be honored and recognized.
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:10:00 AM
thanks Tania xxhugs Jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 10:57:00 AM
They gave their lives for us. Great lines of remembrance, Jan. How could anyone n/a that?
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:10:00 AM
yeah the irony of being n/a then for it to be published :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/11/2023 10:39:00 AM
Hi Jan. We will remember them at our remembrance serivice at eleven tomorrow. Thousands of young ones sent as lambs to the slaughter. Shocking. But its happening now. When will we ever learn? Hope you are well. Best wishes. Tony X
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Date: 11/12/2023 6:09:00 AM
thanks Tony, the ravages of war are still raging on as you say lambs to the slaughter but there are so many innocent victims caught up in these atrocities:-( hugs Jan xx
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