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To fellow young Eagles, At poetry soup, Such a confound, The pull down, Once an Eagle gets off the ground, Flying I guess prohibited, Once exhibited, Good advice to fly, Remove sty from eye, For will pull us all down, Before out love is wound, To fly safe and sound, May we all wind, love on level ground, It is our license to fly, For love doesn’t lie, As we fly in God’s sky, Love’s proof is in our pudding, Or flying we couldn’t, Our protocol, is all, That keeps us from fall, So mixing a little spittle, In our dirt, wouldn’t hurt, And placing that on the sty, of eye, So as to see clearly, Everyone’s, love pie, in the sky, A young eagle flopping around, Of course, should remain on the ground, Un till love is found, This I write to all of those, Who might think to them, I am apposed, We all came from the same nest, Eagles at best, May we all reach our quest, For faith will see us all through, And make us all new, Stuck together as glue, By the unity of us hon, The world will be won, This is my love’s scoop, Written to all at poetry soup, I am here as you all, I don’t wish any to fall, I just believe, that love is the gall, That prevents any from fall, We are all on the ground, Flopping around, Let it be the love of each, that is found, This is certainly my wish, As we push, Toward better times, As our love aligns, And refines, If any be offended, I challenge we end it, I am not you, And you are not me, But in love’s garden, There are many roses, Sincerely Moses!! 7-25-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 4/28/2010 2:39:00 PM
That last stanza was a perfectly lovely summarization of all you said, John.Very nice. Andrea
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Date: 11/16/2009 9:24:00 PM
luv luv luv this excellent poem.. u are so unique, Moses.. thankxxx for sharing ... and your comments made me soar tonight.. being identical in my thinking with the One and Only .. made me feel renewed.. I needed to be reminded... u are an inspiration ... luv luv luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/16/2009 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this poem with the poet world, Moses. Guess we are all poets at heart and I take this poem as encouragement to all. Thank you for all -sincerely- Flopping Eagle -er - I mean ---Robert
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Date: 10/26/2009 9:07:00 PM
Excellent, Moses. You put all quite well and I agree. Thank you for this poem message to Poetry Soup. You have a unique style of poetry and I admire that. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem, "Open your Window". Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 8/16/2009 9:00:00 PM
I like the metaphor, poor eagles flapping on the ground. I have never read anything offensive from you and you have been more than kind in your comments. Lets just keep writing. I'm glad you liked "My Mother's Face." Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/12/2009 10:37:00 PM
If I was like you and everyone was like me, what would be the point... Right? AWESOME write friend.... I sit here jamming to old school Goodie Mobb reading your hip hop poetry friend... Such inspiration.......:JP]
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:40:00 AM
Nice poetry John,Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 7/29/2009 8:56:00 PM
yes indeed! This is a great poem!
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Date: 7/26/2009 8:27:00 AM
our poems have wings like baby birds, slowly at first, then growing and growing, stronger and stronger until soaring... and then we love it... your poem is very nicely done and thought provoking, I liked it very much
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:52:00 PM
Roses don't stink either, right. Good writing. Sara
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