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The earth rotates around itself in 24 hours In nature's infinite diversity of geometric trends, rhythmic patterns, movements and other form principles Rounded edges, with warmth and softness If Rubik's cube was round Let everyone try to hold the world in their hands An icon for logical thinking Solve the puzzle Smart, fun and extremely fascinating No sharp edges Comfortable to hold “Euphoric feeling of freedom” The form for the shape itself Appearance does not matter use humor and imagination The game rolls and everyone participates as sisters and brothers 07.01.2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved If the Rubik's cube was round Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 4th place in the contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/26/2021 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your "well-rounded" verses Anne-Lise. Surely we are all sisters and brothers living together on this "blue marble." hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/3/2021 2:42:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the comment and congratulations, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/26/2021 8:45:00 AM

You captured the balance just right, Anne- Lise in your winning poem, congratulations, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 10:23:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the comment and congratulations, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2021 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. A toy that made one go crazy. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 8:03:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/26/2021 6:00:00 AM

Nice write and congratulations on your winning write, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 8:03:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2021 5:50:00 AM

Congrats on your winner. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 8:02:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/26/2021 1:54:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 8:02:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/26/2021 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations. Still rolling after all those years ...Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2021 8:01:00 AM

- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/14/2021 4:03:00 AM

Liked this Anne-Lise, great imagery and insightful thought too. Hope all well and keeping warm way up north, we had covering of snow ? this morning. Blessings,Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 6:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 1/10/2021 8:08:00 AM

Very well thought out. I think the way things are going lately people are turning our world into a very difficult puzzle. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 6:55:00 AM

- Judy, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/9/2021 11:48:00 PM

Clever write which I am sure Kai will appreciate, Good luck in the contest my dear sis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 6:55:00 AM

- Thank you very much, dear sister for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/8/2021 4:45:00 PM

What a creative write Anne-Lise, like the round world revolves, maybe a round Rubix cube would be easier to solve .~ Hugs, Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2021 6:54:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/8/2021 3:24:00 AM

Enjoyed this. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you always

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2021 3:38:00 AM

- Thank you very much Gina, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2021 4:45:00 PM

Very nice! “The feel of it!”

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2021 2:51:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/7/2021 4:17:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, You've penned a well-written piece for the contest theme. Best wishes in contest. Happy New Year, my friend:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2021 2:51:00 AM

- Hi Alexis, thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - Happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2021 2:07:00 PM

Great take on the contest theme Anne. Good luck in the contest Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2021 2:50:00 AM

- Thank you very much Tom, for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2021 12:29:00 PM

You are so right, Anne-Lise--form or the shape does not matter--we are in this together to solve life's puzzles.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2021 2:50:00 AM

- We have an important puzzle to solve in this new year ... and we must stand together :) - Thank you very much for visiting and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/7/2021 9:38:00 AM

Imaginative and appealing poem my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Well written. Good luck! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2021 11:29:00 AM

- A new year ... with blank sheets ... together as brothers and sisters ... the world would be beautiful, my friend Demetrios :) - Thank you very much for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/7/2021 9:28:00 AM

This is a wonderful different approach to the contest Anne. Best wishes for the contest. Have a lovely day dear friend.. Hugs ~ Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2021 11:26:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your good wishes, dear friend Ani :) - Always nice to see you, take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/7/2021 9:22:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Anne Lise. The joke now is that in USA they are feeling the world is going too fast and one needs to drop a second. Give them a cube, they might solve it. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2021 11:17:00 AM

- I think they have too many things to solve at the moment, Victor - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2021 7:19:00 AM

wow Anne-Lise you certainly have cast a different spin on the rubix cube !:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2021 11:23:00 AM

- I've always hated these cubes ... too much thinking :))) - Thank you very much for your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/7/2021 7:15:00 AM

Out of the (Rubik) box ... literally!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2021 11:20:00 AM

- A difficult topic, U.S. ... must lift a little on the lid ... Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)