Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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We Look Up To the Sky

When I look up at the dusky sky each night
see silver stars which are shining bright
moonbeams sparkle on the sea
I feel so carefree.
velvet blue
we
wave adieu
because soon I’ll see
the sun rising above me
until nightfall brings me pure delight
when I look up at the dusky sky each night

Andaree - 11 Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsored by  Joseph May

Checked with Rhymezone and How Many Syllables

07/13/20

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Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 3:09 AM This is gorgeous Jan! The images of a velvet blue dusk waiting to be wrapped in a nightfall are painted so beautifully. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 3:26 PM This is so very pretty, Jan. It's not your first Andaree , is it? I think I made a contest years ago and asked for Andarees. Maybe you have another one too! Congrats on your awesome win.

JC Brul July 19, 2020 at 9:17 AM Breathtaking piece dear Jan. A FAVE...Congratulations on your TOP WIN!!!

Jenna Logan July 19, 2020 at 6:42 AM Starlight is mesmerizing, Jan, and so is your Andaree. Congratulations.

Winged Warrior July 19, 2020 at 6:38 AM A super Congrats!! on your win Jan...just brilliant!...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong July 18, 2020 at 7:59 PM Congratulations on your fantastic First Placement Jan. This is beautiful! Blessings xxoo

John Gondolf July 18, 2020 at 6:48 PM Seems we were both channeling the moon, congrats on your win, Jan. Hugs, John.

Janice Canerdy July 18, 2020 at 4:19 PM Such a lovely WINNING poem, Jan! Janice

Joseph May July 18, 2020 at 3:43 PM Wonderful write Jan, Congrats on your win..

Lindsay Laurie July 15, 2020 at 7:09 PM Hello Jan ... writing for competitions brings out a side of your writing that I do enjoy Jan. This verse is an example of that - thank you Jan - Lindsay

John Watt July 14, 2020 at 7:25 PM Absolutely love this, Jan. This ought to be a winner in the Andaree contest... you handled the difficulties so smoothly and made it seem effortless. Hugs ~ John

Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2020 at 6:29 PM Hello Jan Allison, you never know what you will see in the sky at night. I like the shinny stars and the full moon in the black sky. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs

Gershon Wolf July 13, 2020 at 10:41 PM Sweet penning, Jan! Really just light as a feather!... And I thought I was in for a touch of sarcasm by the title... I forgot about your pure heart. ~ Not Minding His Manners

Mark Koplin July 13, 2020 at 5:04 PM Absolutely beautiful Jan! Well written indeed.

Tom Cunningham July 13, 2020 at 3:39 PM The beauty of the night sky, so much to sea, you're lucky you don't have much light pollution. Good luck Tom

Mike Gentile July 13, 2020 at 2:58 PM Beautiful this is Jan! I love watching the sky as it relaxes me so and creates a sense of peace. I get that feeling while reading your poem, Good Luck xxoo

Ilene Bauer July 13, 2020 at 2:35 PM this is lovely, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Rico Leffanta July 13, 2020 at 2:27 PM Well, you certainly took your time to write this one! Well done! Inspiration or toil? Aloha! Rico

Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2020 at 2:14 PM - Really beautiful, Jan ... a place at the top of the winner list ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh July 13, 2020 at 5:24 AM I love the night sky, too - This is a beautiful poem that I enjoyed so much. God bless you, sweet Jan

Joanna Daniel July 13, 2020 at 1:06 AM Night sky can surely inspire us, well penned, Jan:)

Michelle Faulkner July 12, 2020 at 11:08 PM A truly glorious ode to the wonders of the night sky, best wishes for the contest!

Edward Ebbs July 12, 2020 at 10:37 PM Nicely done Jan! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 12, 2020 at 10:24 PM Beautiful, Jan! I love the night sky. GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 8:57 PM Jan, your poem is truly lovely, a winner for me _Constance

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