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We Hold Hands in the Dark

It moves, this filmatic night, soon surrounding you quite right, as I in turn, soothe the mallow moon, around you, a little spoon, trying with all her might, to expire the light, and settle into, your hands in the dark.

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Date: 10/27/2024 4:42:00 PM
Gorgeous writing- beautiful style
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Date: 9/1/2024 11:10:00 PM
artfully woven in its brevity, well exressed
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Kate Davies
Date: 9/10/2024 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Mat :)
Date: 8/29/2024 9:04:00 AM
Dear Kate, I love the intimacy and the desire, especially in a world that is dark. But sometimes there is rejection and that can feel raw. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/28/2024 11:05:00 AM
I enjoy this poem. The romance is simple and pure.
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Kate Davies
Date: 8/28/2024 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Hilda,, differing opinions above!

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