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We Glanced-Lei

I gave a glance but did she see Then she glanced, and looked at me Instantly I sensed attraction Tho' the look took but a fraction, For happenstance, it paved the way Ensuring that we met that day So here am I, in love with you I now believe... dreams can come true. Entry for LAY It On Me - 8x8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 29/12/2019. Placed=1st.

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Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/29/2020 6:33:00 PM

How beautiful, Gary. Belated Congratulations on a fine Win, and more importantly, a happy loving partnership.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/30/2020 1:05:00 AM

Thank you Sigrid. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:18:00 PM

Nicely done verse, Gary, congratulations your win. Eve

Gary Smith
Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Eve. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2020 6:39:00 PM

Sweet, sweeter and sweetest --- so sweetly penned, my friend. Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon

Gary Smith
Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2020 6:03:00 PM

I can relate to your words in the most Personal way Gary. Your poem reminds me of when I met my husband on a flight. A chance meeting that lead to a long marriage. I loved your entry. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! xxoo

Gary Smith
Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Connie. :)