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We Glanced-Lei

I gave a glance but did she see
Then she glanced, and looked at me

Instantly I sensed attraction
Tho' the look took but a fraction,

For happenstance, it paved the way
Ensuring that we met that day

So here am I, in love with you
I now believe... dreams can come true.







Entry for
LAY It On Me - 8x8 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
29/12/2019. Placed=1st.

Copyright © Gary Smith | Year Posted 2019

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Sigrid Ermine Date: 9/29/2020 6:33:00 PM How beautiful, Gary. Belated Congratulations on a fine Win, and more importantly, a happy loving partnership. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 9/30/2020 1:05:00 AM Thank you Sigrid. :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/16/2020 10:18:00 PM Nicely done verse, Gary, congratulations your win. Eve Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM Thank you Eve. :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/16/2020 6:39:00 PM Sweet, sweeter and sweetest --- so sweetly penned, my friend. Congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM Thank you Gershon. :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/16/2020 6:03:00 PM I can relate to your words in the most Personal way Gary. Your poem reminds me of when I met my husband on a flight. A chance meeting that lead to a long marriage. I loved your entry. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! xxoo Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/17/2020 2:37:00 AM Thank you Connie. :)

Charles Messina Date: 1/16/2020 7:36:00 AM Sometimes.. dreams DO come true. Great write, Gary. Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 1/16/2020 7:42:00 AM Thank you Charlie. :)

Barry Stebbings Date: 12/31/2019 12:55:00 PM Very romantic, Gary, I have not seen this form before. Good luck in the contest. // Barry. Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 12/31/2019 1:00:00 PM Thank you Barry, me neither. :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/29/2019 4:29:00 PM Delicate and so lovely in rhyme form! Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 12/29/2019 4:32:00 PM Thank you Caren. :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/29/2019 12:55:00 PM Love the flow and rhythm of this one. Good luck in the contest! :) gw Login to Reply Gary Smith Date: 12/29/2019 1:02:00 PM Thank you Gershon. :)