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We Didn'T Listen

The cry from a young girl, it turned into a scream Putting my hand over my ears, I prayed it was a dream A voice so deep and threatening, gave a blood curdling laugh Don’t cover your eyes up girl you are the next one in the bath. Pulling down my fingers, I saw he held her in the bath The terror in her eyes yet all he could do was laugh He held her under the water, her arms and legs kicked in fear He let her breathe for a second, saying ‘it’s your turn soon my dear.’ I could not move my legs; they were tied with a black tie My naked body battered, I couldn’t even cry The little girl no more than five, her screams no longer heard He looks disappointed, my eyesight was now blurred He hoisted me in his arms; I tried to scream so loud He plunged me in the water; her hair covered her like a shroud There was no room for two, her body floated there One last bubble from her nose, the last escape of air. My legs were tied, my arms were free, a scream through the air did rend Was I to die and spend my end, in a bath with my dead friend? The face of my mother hovered over me the face of my father there too Their arms were holding out, but there was nothing they could do. My head held down, my fingers pulled at the hair of my now dead friend The pressure of his hand on me it was then, I knew, now was the end Why oh why didn’t we listen we were told never to speak to strangers The answer came too late; we never ever saw the dangers. Contest entry. Poems to keep you awake at night. © 3/06/2013 GG

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Date: 6/13/2013 10:50:00 AM
congrats a truly deserved winner here, love this poetry of yours Girl
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:07:00 AM
Oh shucks, this is definitely a nightmare for anyone-- the horror of it all and you captured it so well here, Mandy! Congrats on your win and hugs!
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Date: 6/11/2013 8:54:00 AM
congrats on your win Mandy.....nicely done
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Date: 6/10/2013 6:55:00 PM
Not only won't I sleep tonight.......I AIN'T TAKING A BATH OR A SHOWER!!! LOL !!
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Date: 6/10/2013 2:07:00 PM
congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT
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Date: 6/10/2013 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the win. I'll be posting a blog with additional comments. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 6/6/2013 6:48:00 AM
shivers ran down my spine as i read this.. well written
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:51:00 PM
wow your imagination (I hope) is surely displayed here,, and yes it is scary,, but as usual very well written...
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:45:00 AM
Yes, not to worry harry, Imagination told you I was weird lol xx
Date: 6/3/2013 8:02:00 PM
OMG Mandy, you make me feel chills of terror, I may have nightmare tonight, lol. Well written write! Hugs
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:42:00 AM
I hope not let me tell you a story , once upon a time there was a little Girl called Cecilia, one night, lyig in bed desperate to sleep she heard the tap in the bathroom......lol xx
Date: 6/3/2013 2:38:00 PM
great title and certainly a poem to keep you awake at night! very frightening!
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:41:00 AM
Thanks Ilene , sweet dreams xx
Date: 6/3/2013 11:28:00 AM
the sheer terror is in very word terrific imagery stupendous write Shadow gl in contest
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:40:00 AM
Bless you, it scares me to think i wrote it lol xx
Date: 6/3/2013 11:18:00 AM
Scaryyyyikes... Very nice, Mandy... Good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Terry xx
Date: 6/3/2013 11:16:00 AM
Holy Creepy, Mandy! You ought to win with this one...
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Caleb xx
Date: 6/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
I hardly know what to say. Powerful horrible imagery
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Date: 6/5/2013 12:39:00 AM
Thanks Allan, I think that is what is required so hopefully I am on the right track xx

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