We Danced at the Gas Station

This poem is featured on YouTube (The Convergence point with Dr. Ivan Edwards), bringing its words to life through spoken expression.

A gas station on the edge of the city,  
Neon lights buzzing in the night,  
graffiti scrawled across walls,  
the hum of distant traffic our backdrop.  

The place was nothing special,  
oil-stained concrete and flickering signs.  
But love has a way  
of making the ordinary 
extraordinary.  

We stopped for gas,  
or maybe 
an excuse 
to pause the drive.  
And as music spilled 
from the car radio,  
we couldn’t resist.  

We stepped out 
into the urban glow,  
sneakers scuffing 
against the asphalt.  
And right there, 
between pumps and parked cars,  
we danced.  

Love found its stage,  
transforming the ordinary 
into a dreamscape.  
And as the world blurred,  
we held each other close.  
Cheek to cheek, 
we swayed—  
slow and deliberate.  

Every movement 
a silent promise,  
every touch 
a spark.  

The scent of gasoline 
mingled with our breath. 
Yet all we could feel  
was the warmth 
of passion.  

Our fingers 
clasped tightly,  
as if letting go
might undo 
the magic.  

Bodies melting 
into one rhythm,  
hearts beating 
in perfect harmony.  

The city paused to watch—  
the hum of traffic faded into the distance.  
Strangers gathered,  
drawn to our orbit.  

Teens paused, their phones forgotten,  
a crowd gathering,  
their faces lit  
by the glow 
of LED streetlights.  

Skateboarders froze mid-trick,  
delivery bikes slowed to a stop.  
Even the gas station clerk leaned out  
to catch the scene.  

Above us, stars dimmed their light,  
yielding to the glow between us.  
Angels paused in flight,  
holding their breath for love’s quiet power.  

While skyscrapers and streetlights  
formed a shimmering backdrop  
to the dance  
that turned 
grit into gold.  

We danced slow,  
as though time was ours to command,  
swaying to melodies  
etched deep into our souls.  

Cheek to cheek, hands entwined,  
we stood unshaken, unstoppable—  
A fleeting moment  
made eternal 
by the strength 
of our love.  

The gas station, no longer mundane,  
became sacred ground.  
Marked forever by the dance of two lovers—  
slow, deliberate, deeply in love,  
turning the night into poetry.  

The city kept watching  
as the song we danced to came to a close.  
Above, 
skyscrapers stood 
like silent giants,  
and streetlamps flickered
in rhythm with the beat.  

The stars fought to shine through  
the haze of city lights.  
But their brilliance bowed  
To the raw energy 
of our moment.  

We danced like we owned the night,  
like nothing else mattered.  
No smog, 
no sirens, 
no chaos, 
Just the music and us.  

Love erupted 
like a beat drop,  
electric, 
unfiltered, 
unstoppable,  
turning a gas station 
into a stage,  
The urban jungle 
into our temple.  

The crowd cheered as the melody faded,  
And we stood breathless, 
hand in hand,  
forever imprinted  
in the city’s memory.  

Two lovers 
who danced at the gas station,  
turning 
grit into gold  
And the 
mundane into magic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/16/2025 8:57:00 PM
Epic!! Dr. Edwards, this is so, so, so much better, richer, and more enduring than Leonard Bernstein and his 'West Side Story,' a tour-de-force for its day. I can just feel the words and emotions tumbling from your heart's inkwell... I think you should film it -- produce and direct it. Bravo. A FAVE for me. Thanks, Gershon
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Dr. Ivan Edwards
Date: 6/18/2025 1:59:00 PM
Gershon, your words mean the world! I’m honored that this piece resonated so deeply. A musical creation is indeed on the horizon, and your encouragement fuels the vision. Thank you for your unwavering support!
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