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We Both Got a Second Chance

A gorgeous day, first day back at school. I could hardly wait! It was still dark when I left, On two medications that should have never been prescribed together. But they were, and by the same doctor, two days apart. I knew I was going to be killed about sixteen miles into my journey, And I had an hour to go. I was going to be dead, and I deserved to be, and I knew it. My heart was beating a thousand beats a second. It was not even light outside. Why had I left so early? Worse…. Why was I going ninety-two miles an hour on gravel, Heading toward Dead Man’s Curve, In my beautiful new silver Thunderbird with stars painted on the side? There was no way I was going to make this eighty-six degree curve and I knew it. I yelled “God, I have had a great life!” right before the crash. We plunged into a six foot ditch and Then we crashed into a twenty foot embankment of earth. My car and I. And we hit HARD. My first thought when my eyes opened seconds later was…. Death does not seem that bad. There was an overwhelming feeling of disappointment. The most disappointed I have ever been. So death is good? I was instantly confused, never having died before. I bravely looked down to take one last look at my body. And with surprise, realized that I was still wearing it. I thought probably my legs would be crushed. They were not. The car door was jammed. I rolled down the window And pushed myself out, glad no one was coming to see me Do this in my pretty brown dress with the enormous white polka dots. Two nice people came by in a truck a few minutes later. Not weird, as this was the country. They gave me a lift back to my town, sixteen miles away. They told me they would leave me on the outskirts Because they had to get to work. But they liked me, so they took me all the way home. I ran into the house and yelled “Where are the keys to your truck? I have to get to work.” My husband knows me well. He threw me his keys, and I ran out again. I showed the doctor later in the week these two prescriptions he had given me two days apart. He was shocked and said “no one should have ever prescribed these two pills together.” So I guess we were both given a second chance, for I have kept this a secret for twenty years. Written January 20, 2019 Contest: Second Chances Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 1/23/2019 8:00:00 PM
Congrats Caren, for your win with this amazing, OMG, thank God, that you are still here story. Of course, you had to get to work! What is that country song? God Take the Wheel? He may not have taken the wheel, but I think he was in the passenger seat!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2019 8:43:00 PM
I truly think He was in the clouds, for I think a GIANT unseen hand came from heaven and flipped that car right-side up minutes before I would have been killed when we landed on all of that broken glass. I had T-tops! They were glass, and that car flipped in mid air from upside down to right side up without hitting anything.
Date: 1/23/2019 8:20:00 AM
Well told authentic tale of a monumental second chance in your life. So wonderful to have you with us...and your loving poetry too.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Greg. I am glad to be here. If I disappear tomorrow either I am gone-gone as in flesh-gone or I simply ran off, because it is kind of a pattern. Do not be scared or upset either way. I will be back. Reincarnation is alive and well in my world.
Date: 1/22/2019 1:59:00 PM
what a story! and you told it so, well! Congratulations on your honors in this contest!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/22/2019 2:03:00 PM
It is pretty much true from start to finish. It feels like cheating just to type out the truth like this.
Date: 1/22/2019 1:52:00 PM
Using computer databases, U.S. doctors now have access to the medications all patients take. Wish they'd had this technology in time to prevent what happened to you. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/22/2019 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. This was 1997, maybe too early for that? But I saw the same doctor two days apart!
Date: 1/21/2019 8:16:00 AM
Sometimes I think that they do certain actions so many times for so many patients that they are only half there; it's automatic. Like programmed robots, they just write out prescriptions, often not realizing they aren't considering the individual's situation.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/21/2019 1:22:00 PM
I think he probably forgot I had been in there two days earlier. Right? HAHAHAHA I must be pretty forget-able, and he is too as I do not even remember his name.
Date: 1/21/2019 5:13:00 AM
WOW! Doctors they love all that money and rush you in and out, what a story you sure did get a second change my friend! well written my friend good luck in the contest Caren!
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Date: 1/21/2019 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Bobby. I had to really think about whether or not I would "out the doctor". He looked at me sternly and said "No doctor would have prescribed you these two prescriptions at the same time. Who prescribed this one?" When he turned them both over and looked at his name on both he turned orange. I will never forget that, and I did not get a stern talking to after that or an apology.

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