Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

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*** I dedicate this poem to all my friends all over the globe... I had only one experience being so away from home when I had work in Saudi Arabia but am so glad I earned lots of friends that even until now they still remember me and asking me when will I get back there.. And also to my friends here in Soup, I don't need to mention you all but I thank you for  being so supportive, caring, loving and wow, I'm like reaching the world because of you.. =)! Hence, I hope my muse will keep on flowing to write more... 

I will hug you all by my prayers......~Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo.

We Became Friends By One Click

WE BECAME FRIENDS BY ONE CLICK

I am from east you are from... west? North? South?
to whichever place you're from, hear my happy shout! :D
Remember   the   first   moment I said  hi and hello
you did not repel instead you appeal like magneto...

You... I never seen. I never heard
but you hug my heart with your words.
You are as yellow as the rising sun 
but sometimes sad you make my tears run 

with the heart-to-heart stories we share.
Maybe because we are thousand miles apart
defensive barriers and built-in walls we tear
bubbling free is our blossoming fresh start.

There is a clue when you are feeling blue
this when you drew views lacking hues.
Of humour, you may not hear my thunder laugh
nor behold my grin that is whole or half

but so sweet you are always there- a care bear!
Nights and days passed, we want to more than chat
like a meteor, we did try this voice-call...
Spark! I heard your voice, my oh my, I rejoiced!

Your presence a present whenever no one is there
for when I push the button "send", time you spare
to reply, you care... "Thank you" is all I say.
More, you even said: "You'll add me to your pray'r"

Internet signals like unstable ECG antagonizing our talk,
I thank our Dear God our bond as strong as a rock,
months rolled, we discovered we could duet to write
verses singing rhymes, flying high our own  kite...

To the whole wide moving world, I want them to know
if persons are honest and sincere they will surely grow
as finding true people-- there are risks. Dig in but do it slow
'cause real persons are as precious as gems that glow
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MY CYBER FAMILY - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Mystic Rose
~~~3rd place~~~

POEM OF THE DAY: JULY 04, 2015

OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO
11:42 pm, July 02, 2015

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Darlene Gifford August 1, 2015 at 3:57 PM Hi, Olive, I've made many friends here with one click, as you say. And I hope to include you also. Congrats on your high win with this well deserving poem. Mine did not place in this contest. But that is ok, I am growing as a poet and the next one, I hope will show new growth as a poet. ~~Darlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:45 AM oh why not including me is always fine.. =')! thanks much.. I read yours and I find it awesome... Looking back, I am also like you but just the interest me to learn and be better is the reason why I didn't stop... =')! I am not saying Im so good now but I know I improved as these is manifested to my poems.. =')!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 28, 2015 at 12:17 AM Subtle sentiments so beautifully put to words Olive! Congrats on great win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:41 AM thank you so much Dr. Upma.. =')!

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 5:38 PM Such wonderful sentiments Olive and I ADORE the clever title - so wonderful when things are perfect and you really do 'click'in more ways than one :-) hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 8:40 AM Hahah I love your comment Jan and that's true.. =')! hugs back! thanks much!

Skat A July 25, 2015 at 3:10 PM Olive, congrats on your win. SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 1, 2015 at 8:59 AM thanks much Skat.. =')!

Eve Roper July 25, 2015 at 10:39 AM Congratulations again on your wonderful win . Hugs Eve Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 31, 2015 at 9:22 AM thank you so much EVe,... =')!hugs back!

Julia Ward July 20, 2015 at 8:42 AM I respond joyfully to your poem full of joy, Olive. Julia, xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 11:06 AM thank you so much Julia.. :D!

Robert Lindley July 16, 2015 at 9:14 AM Just found this gem this morn. You write so well in any form you care to use my friend. A super 7 on this one!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 20, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thank you so much Robert.. =')!

Nandita Das July 6, 2015 at 6:36 AM This is such a lovely poem. You have such a loving, grateful heart. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 9:24 AM thank you so much Nandita.. =")

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2015 at 5:11 AM i say yes to this engrossing , eloi.. hoping our friendship grows!... congrats on your POTD... husay naman!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 9:22 AM Nette, thank you for your trust and kind remarks=") Weeee I hope too our friendship grows!!!~Olive Eloisa

Zakhe Michael Mcunu July 5, 2015 at 3:12 AM This is really great work, i love it. thank you for such a moving piece. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 9:14 AM thank you so much Zakhe..-

Verlena S. Walker July 5, 2015 at 2:03 AM Very well done Olive. Congrats on POTD! Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 9, 2015 at 9:10 AM thank you so much Verlena.. ~Olive

Eve Roper July 4, 2015 at 9:58 PM Wonderful write, Olive, congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs Eve Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 8, 2015 at 6:54 PM Thank you so much Eve... =") I am glad you like it.. =")

James Fraser July 4, 2015 at 1:55 PM Love the moment when I clicked, for we clicked with our collabs Olive. Meeting you in person and we clicked and clicked more, hence our poetry friendship growing more and more, so much we'll write a poem beside the Pacific Ocean, and all because of a click that's clicked. Hugs always from your Huge One, little one, xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 7, 2015 at 9:54 AM James, yes we clicked so easily.. I didn't expect it just happens.. =)!Im glad it did.. hugs and hugs~Olive Eloisa James Fraser July 4, 2015 at 1:56 PM Wonderful poetry and I so love the second to last Stanza xxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2015 at 1:21 PM - Me Happy (and you of course :))) ..... CONGRATULATIONS !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 8, 2015 at 10:07 AM Thanka much Anne Lise for your kind words.. hugs and hugs!!! xoxo ~oLive Eloisa

Gary Bateman July 4, 2015 at 1:15 PM Olive Eloisa, Congratulation on POTD!! Very Well-Done. Best Wishes, Gary Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 8, 2015 at 9:05 AM GAry thank you.. =")

Constance La France July 4, 2015 at 12:11 PM Olive congratulations on having this beautiful write selected as Poem of the Day, enjoy the honor and thanks for visiting my poetry Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 7, 2015 at 8:35 AM Thank you so much Broken Wings.. I didn't expect it to be chosen.. =")

Laura Hay July 4, 2015 at 10:17 AM Well deserved potd superbly expressed. Congrats, Laura Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2015 at 7:44 AM thank you LAura.. =)! God bless!

Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 9:15 AM Congrats on POTD. Well expressed sentiments. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2015 at 7:44 AM thank you so much Richard... =)!

Kp Nunez July 4, 2015 at 7:57 AM Yes! POTD! This is a well thought-out write that resonates with this reader. Our intention is "As much as it is possible, live in peace with everyone". However, it is also true that there are friends, close friends and there are acquaintances. Your heart's maturity once again shows in your write, Olive. Congrats on your POTD! hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2015 at 12:09 AM Kim, kabayan! :D! Thank you so much... Your presence here in Soup and also with NEtte and all other Pinoys and Pinoys inspire me to write more!!! You are right with the intention.. =0 Happy SUnday!~Olive Eloisa

Tim Smith July 4, 2015 at 7:28 AM This a fabulous piece Olive and shows us how true friendship can be attained.... Congratulations on poem of the day Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2015 at 12:05 AM Tim, thank you so much for your comment.. You are also one among the many persons who inspired this poem... =) I'll never forget how you dedicated a poem to me when I celebrated my birthday last year.. =) Two or three of your poems inspired me write a "reply".. You are sure one romantic, kind-hearted person.. =)~Olive Eloisa

Charmaine Chircop July 3, 2015 at 7:49 AM This beautiful poem gave me goosebumps.I did manage to make some sinciere friends here too,two of which from your country ,Nette and Sweet Nikko.I look forward to read more of you,and yes of course,if one day I visit ,or you'll visit our isle.We'll make it a point to meet .: ).Going to my fvs. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 4, 2015 at 11:56 PM Thank you Charmaine for your kind visit and generous comment.. =) I remember your comment in my blog: my SOuper Dates.. =)! weeeee, PoetrySoup is a big family.. =) I'd love too.. =) Happy Sunday! =) ~Olive Eloisa

Milton Robertson July 3, 2015 at 6:36 AM Brilliant Olive, You are a Friend Indeed. Stay close to The Lord and He shall guide you through Life. And keep writing your beautiful writes. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 4, 2015 at 11:50 PM Milton, since I renewed my relationship with God I vow to served everyday of my life with all that I have and with all that I am.. =)! These thoughts, these writes comes through His blessings that inspires me... =)~ Hence, I am forever grateful to His faithfulness and love on me.. Yes, I'll not stop writing..~Olive Eloisa =)~

Matthew Anish July 2, 2015 at 11:21 PM True words spoken in your last line! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:04 AM Thanks much Matthew.. likewise, peace and love to you..=)!~Olive Eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2015 at 1:42 PM - Oh, dear friend Olive .... your words tell me all about your golden heart !!! - a poem that I want to read many, many times ...... over and over again .... a 7 + fav. of course !!!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2015 at 10:35 PM Anne Lise thank you so much for being a good friend to me here in Soup... You are one of the many who inspired these thoughts.. I thought I could only say it in three stanzas but I find it hard.. =) I could never forget how you and I exchange hugs in one of my poems in which at that time I need it most... =)~Olive Eloisa

Paul Callus July 2, 2015 at 1:22 PM Hi Olive_eloi:) You have been an inspiration to many. Your special smile and unwavering faith have got a lot to do with it. You have been a true friend to me; that click worked wonders. Take care and be blessed. hugss // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2015 at 9:41 PM Thank you dearie Paul, I am all glad and humbled that I am seen as an inspiration.. =) I believe we all have the gift of smile just that nowadays some people start to like frowning more than smiling.. I am constantly undergoing changes which is good because it truly makes me better.. =) Thanks you.. =)!~Olive ELoisa

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