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We Are of One Mind

We Are of One Mind When you walk into the room, Redness rushes through my face. Soon, my heartbeat starts its race. And I feel that I shall swoon. Gifts you give, my soul consumes. Beautiful, loving, strong, tall… Fantasies forever call. Sweet reality resumes. I have need you come near. On your word I do rely. For me, you would surely die. Together, we know no fear. If I’m sad, you cheer me up. If I’m weak, you give me strength. If I’m cold, you bring your warmth. If I’m sick, you share the cup. If frightened, you make me brave. If famished, you gather food. You are kind and never rude. We share dreams together; crave. When you waltzed into my sun, to you, my soul ran, embraced. We placed our hearts in joy's race. Together, forever, as one. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 24, 2010 Poetic form: Enclosed Rhyme

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Date: 1/25/2010 4:51:00 AM
I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:52:00 AM
Lovely tribute to the one you love, Dane Ann! And thank you for your comment on "Black Cat". Love, Gert
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:38:00 PM
This speaks of everlasting love.. very nice..
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:23:00 PM
we truly are of one mind.thank you for your kind comments.Just wanted to say hello and hope all is well.
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