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We Are a Star

Shining bright, leading us in the sky Poking through darkness, bringing hope Sometimes shooting, for a wish To be made for us all Watching us in sleep Holding meaning We are too A true Star Heidi Sands 1/19/23

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Komal Walimbe

Date: 1/21/2023 6:38:00 AM

Beautifully penned and great sentiments here!:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2023 6:43:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/20/2023 9:56:00 AM

Heidi, your Nonet has some really lovely sentiments. I really enjoy the way you weave your sentences together.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2023 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Sotto. I love to see your kind feedback. I appreciate it :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/20/2023 9:52:00 AM

That’s a lovely Nonet poem Heidi, I agree we are a true star, one day we’ll shine in the sky at night. Hope your eye problem is mended soon… Belle

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Belle! Yes we will. The eye problem will take some time. Further testing is next week and may need to see neurologist too. He talked about fluid and pressure in brain. I appreciated you support! I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/20/2023 6:39:00 AM

Beautiful glimpse of star.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. :)

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 1/20/2023 6:18:00 AM

Excellent point Heidi. We all have it in us to be shining stars.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2023 6:26:00 AM

Thank you Kenneth. I hope you have a nice day. You don't happen to know an Ora Cheney do you? :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2023 3:22:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts in your Nonet - I love how you string your lines together, conclusion, 'We are too - a true - Star. Sad to hear you are not feeling well my friend, love and blessings to you. Hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2023 6:25:00 AM

Hi Jennifer. Thank you. I am feeling ok, just some poor eyesight and dizzy spells. My optic nerve is enlarged. So I need more testing. I appreciate your support. Bless you :)